In A Weird Way

[ChyllTyrant]

In A Weird Way


i've clam baked to raisen dry pinot
i've followed marlin through shallow waters
and through daggers threw anger through merlin's matter

ingested poison
and died jested
i've lived a million years and not learned a thing about love

i've humored my tumors with the stale trails of cigarette smoke that escape my nostrils
i've failed to impress as a miserable mister w/0 mistress
i've crawled low down the halls of sanity and shot the shit with myself

maniac mcgee's retainer
i need a restrainer
as a resiner
of junk food and burnt offers in the mail

of a love
of above
off from a form
of firm frames and fortified fortuity
"fresh"
(i wish out loud)
"fly"
(i think to myself)

i've jumped a thousand waves and rippled back to the surface as an under-towed turk

i've serviced as an over-towed truck and bit my tongue

and bit my tongue when i saw your eye shadow and thought about how ridiculous we were
standing there together
with our hands in each pocket

others?

but i slipped out with an empty locket
and you slipped out without a kiss,
and you had my wallet in your right arm

karma...

i wish we we weee down inside

way hadn't ever met

[Bhitiah]

"i've lived a million years and not learned a thing about love" Me either

"i've humored my tumors with the stale trails of cigarette smoke that escape my nostrils"
^^ me too


I really enjoyed those two parts. The whole peice was fresh, but those are what made me reallly be like, what lol

[AlmostFamous]

damn chyll you crazy for this one

i can always rely on you to add some ~~~~e and twist to the realm

niceness for sure.. the same lines that bhitaih quoted are the ones i was gonna quote

[ChyllTyrant]

thanks peeps... good lookin for the replies...

PEACE

[UFO the Phoenix]

wooooooooooord up

you are crazy for this one.....abstract gone overboard I just love your work man I can-not-stress-that-fact-enough!!!!!....the word manipulation this time around was mind blowing....you were like a mad scientist turned poet born again immortal attackted by love...lol.....in a weird way no other way to reply to this but to say this was word inventions mix with furgiture language ~~~~e with some alliterions of the "F" word (I love that!!!)....bringing in slight repititions that was like organized maddness.....originality at its highest peak no looking down just going with the flow you've taken this style and rebirth it into your own giving new meaning to the word poetry and creativity....I stand in awe by this piece and thank you in advance for the poems that it will for sure birth into my own style which will later spawn yet another classic....but let it be known this was its origin

woooooord up

rep level up!!!!

[ChyllTyrant]

thanks a million ufo...

sometimes it feels like the world is too much, and all that's left is me and my computer... so i am forced to pump out jams like this one...

thanks again...

PEACE

[lpoet]

i always enjoy your poetry b/c it is so unique to u..i often can compare poets to others in here but i can not do that with you..u have your own way and i admire that

of a love
of above
off from a form
of firm frames and fortified fortuity
"fresh"
(i wish out loud)
"fly"
(i think to myself)


great lines right there..like your play on words

Upin for y a

[MisterEThoughts]

This definintely was wierd... HAHA abstract but quite amazing... I got to say that the way you put words together is really nice...it makes me imagine wierd things that you describe crazy stuff... I enjoyed this keep it up man...