quick poem

[Type A]

cancerous messages spread through labatomy eveangelists handin this out like pychology
you stand and shit while I dance on kids puncturing arteries
pardon me, a part of me is trapped under the sea where the hunters be stunning thee sonnin you to sleep
rockology if what I estimated guesstimated through estimations that one time of ten you would have resterated ya reservations to hesitatate ya levitations and and appreciate the sound,I mean there aint no way were going down there aint no way were going down

[TheDelusional1]

Originally Posted by Type A

cancerous messages spread through labatomy eveangelists handin this out like pychology
you stand and shit while I dance on kids puncturing arteries
pardon me, a part of me is trapped under the sea where the hunters be stunning thee sonnin you to sleep
rockology if what I estimated guesstimated through estimations that one time of ten you would have resterated ya reservations to hesitatate ya levitations and and appreciate the sound,I mean there aint no way were going down there aint no way were going down

Not to be an asshole but quit rapping out of the dictionary.
Big words doesn't make you smart, it's how you use the little ones around them that can make you sound intelligent. There wasn't a meaning to this senseless rambling, at least nothing I could come up with that had a good meaning. Use your talent for good, not stupid.

TD1

[Mind~$oul]

^You didnt have to be so harsh with it man lol. But in all honestly I agree with you.

One luv

[screamer]

quick poem

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Okay, I like4 some of your metaphor.. especailly in this line
cancerous messages spread through labatomy eveangelists handin this out like pychology
(the like psycholgy" simile was a little confusing to me... like a brainwah sort of deal?
you stand and shit while I dance on kids puncturing arteries
This stand and shit line thrwe me off a bit, maybe if you expianed what's bein shit on perhaps
pardon me, a part of me is trapped under the sea where the hunters be stunning thee sonnin you to sleep
(whats sonnin? Do you meaning stunning. If so, good, good imagery)

rockology if what I estimated guesstimated through estimations that one time of ten you would have resterated ya reservations to hesitatate ya levitations and and appreciate the sound,I mean there aint no way were going down there aint no way were going down


This tumble of words here actually flowed quite nicely.... very abstract to me (which is a good thing) But I think it needs a rewrite. (and add more to it I think)