I See Things (Beautiful Darkness)

d-rell · 02-01-2005, 09:41 AM

Blue Eagles
Wings spread like the back of a quarter
flew peaceful
feathers reflected off the face of the waters
Eyes evil
Mustard-yellow, needle-like pupils, scan the mellow, midnight, for movements
random insights, illusions
filed in fields of gloom, jaded clouds, a silver moon, Aroused
His toes arched 'round a branch, beautiful darkness enchants
fright and the heartless romanced
the Lunar artist, paints the skies
the grey Coyote's anchient cry, provides the soundtrack
until the crawlers herd the dawn crack....the beautiful darkness

~1~

Brit Boi Gee · 02-01-2005, 10:33 AM

This was mystifying and abstract; a description of another world. It definately took me away someplace. It seemed like a stream of coinciousness ( maybe written quickly?) It seemed to have underlying Unexpected rhythms that tend to break out out in that way, when you write at speed. I could be wrong though. I enjpy these pieces, asthey always remind me how the imagination can ffly and settle anywhere magnifying its freedom.

keep it up

Mind~$oul · 02-02-2005, 05:06 PM

Left me wanting more because I couldnt really just understand it. Would have read a lot easier if you would have worked on the structure. Uppin for you

One luv

UFO the Phoenix · 02-04-2005, 12:42 AM

no shortcuts in the realm...respone to others....dont just post and run

02-01-2005, 09:41 AM	#1 (permalink)
d-rell Registered User Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 840	I See Things (Beautiful Darkness) Blue Eagles Wings spread like the back of a quarter flew peaceful feathers reflected off the face of the waters Eyes evil Mustard-yellow, needle-like pupils, scan the mellow, midnight, for movements random insights, illusions filed in fields of gloom, jaded clouds, a silver moon, Aroused His toes arched 'round a branch, beautiful darkness enchants fright and the heartless romanced the Lunar artist, paints the skies the grey Coyote's anchient cry, provides the soundtrack until the crawlers herd the dawn crack....the beautiful darkness ~1~ Last edited by d-rell; 02-01-2005 at 09:42 AM.

02-01-2005, 10:33 AM	#2 (permalink)
Brit Boi Gee manifest the zen Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Near To Athena Posts: 15,977	This was mystifying and abstract; a description of another world. It definately took me away someplace. It seemed like a stream of coinciousness ( maybe written quickly?) It seemed to have underlying Unexpected rhythms that tend to break out out in that way, when you write at speed. I could be wrong though. I enjpy these pieces, asthey always remind me how the imagination can ffly and settle anywhere magnifying its freedom. keep it up __________________ They all laughed when I said I was going to be a comedian. They aren't laughing now. -Bob Monkhouse Brit Boi has a highly calibrated wifermometer

02-02-2005, 05:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	Left me wanting more because I couldnt really just understand it. Would have read a lot easier if you would have worked on the structure. Uppin for you One luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

02-04-2005, 12:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS! Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: Oceanside CA USA Posts: 2,965	no shortcuts in the realm...respone to others....dont just post and run __________________ *The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:* JESUS CHRIST Oddie Sloan

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