Girl.

[Ratiko Malodic]

I like a woman who is perfect in her imperfections,
Who doenst listen to the ignorance surrounding my complextion,
A woman so godly she can pull the coulds from my darker times,
some one who can see when im down and read between the lines,
A woman who isnt afraid to fall into the depths of unconditional love,
A woman who wont run from my troubles but instead stands to rise above,
To share a passion that every writer dreams of in his songs,
To share a love that will even through death stay strong,
A strong woman who isnt afraid to exert herself,
Who isnt controled by looks,class,greed or wealth,
A woman who likes me for who i am and with a love that isnt materialistic,
She can sense when my spirt is down and would never hesitate to lift it,
With this woman i'd re-write the defftintion of love,
With no explanation but just the example of us,
We'd live every day as a happy ending like from the movies,
we'd have an attraction beyond words or comprehension,
I'd be so proud that evey opertunity i give your name a mention.

[Madnick]

This was short but it was damn good. I love the way you expressed your feeling in this piece. And the way you basically said it, the wording was perfect and I liked this piece alot.

[screamer]

You colored you idealism quite well in regards to yr. opposite sex. I wonder if you placed this decription in the personal ads, you would get exactly what you want... \

(p.s make sure you include that she should have Mirahh Carey's clevage)

[Johnnie French]

Very very very very very on point. I could keep bring the "very's" but this is what I want. Thank you for this.

[akqrate]

Yep, i need one of those too, plus maybe looks of Jessica Biel, i'm feelin her at the moment. Awesome wording and great rhyme scheme. This is the first time i peeped u and u really impressed.

[Brit Boi Gee]

This piece summed up nicely what you want from a woman and I think it contained a lot of very nice descriptions to aid in its meaning.

To share a passion that every writer dreams of in his songs,
To share a love that will even through death stay strong,

These were my favourite lines and I believe the most powerfull.

keep it up man

[Mind~$oul]

Great piece man. Very detailed. When you find her, find out if she has a sister or a cousin. Uppin for you


One luv

[Ratiko Malodic]

lol @ MS, thanks guys.

[Feme Sole]

i wrote a similar poem before...much more cynical of course but same idea yes...

nice stuff luv =)

[Feme Sole]

edit......tosser

[UFO the Phoenix]

be sure to respone to others

[RealMS]

With this woman i'd re-write the defftintion of love,
-this line is somewhat funny, out of the blue-I didn't expect to come across this line. Me and mine attempted to "re-write" the definition, sort of like a vow type though it turned out, but it's nice.

The first line is like a stab to the heart, no sugar coats about it. Gotta be careful about that though, her sister might relate, as far as blood goes.
-Much Love

[MarQuise*]

Originally Posted by Yassa Arabfat

I like a woman who is perfect in her imperfections,
Who doenst listen to the ignorance surrounding my complextion,
A woman so godly she can pull the coulds from my darker times,
some one who can see when im down and read between the lines,
A woman who isnt afraid to fall into the depths of unconditional love,
A woman who wont run from my troubles but instead stands to rise above,
To share a passion that every writer dreams of in his songs,
To share a love that will even through death stay strong,
A strong woman who isnt afraid to exert herself,
Who isnt controled by looks,class,greed or wealth,
A woman who likes me for who i am and with a love that isnt materialistic,
She can sense when my spirt is down and would never hesitate to lift it,
With this woman i'd re-write the defftintion of love,
With no explanation but just the example of us,
We'd live every day as a happy ending like from the movies,
we'd have an attraction beyond words or comprehension,
I'd be so proud that evey opertunity i give your name a mention.

thank you for sharin this Sweety =)

damn, we talk, but never like this, this is another side 2u, that i really like, and has shown me how much more there is to you...

Not that i ever doubted your personality or nothing, or your mind frame, but damn when reading this, i jus seriously see you in a different light, you no longer the boy who makes me laugh loads =)

This had real feelin to it, it was such a beautiful read, i am so damn proud of you hahah!

It was soooo touchin, and from this, it gives me a sense of you wud treat your girl with the up most respest, do anything for her, as long as she proves herself to you...

Mwah, Mwah and Mwah...

Much Much <3

Sunny. . . *