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Old 01-20-2005, 02:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Leave the rest up to me..
I hate someone I barely know..
I'll blow it off though, act like it's something sweet
She wanna talk - I'll answer slow.
Prove everything she says wrong
.. now who's eating crow?
I laugh at her attitude and the way she carries herself
Keep my mouth shut and just vybe to a beat;
I'm FREE..
Stay live in the street; BUT I CAN'T!
I've been burdened by a stranger since sixteen.
My shoulders need rest, it's a burden you can see..
Tell her to come in this room - Leave the rest up to me.




i REALLY hate this lady that i work with.
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Old 01-20-2005, 03:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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lol two piece her lol

yo she has gotten on your nerves since what 16 and you haven't snapped yet ? wow thats crazy patients. i aint got that lol

oh by the way i liked this joint

stay up
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Old 01-20-2005, 10:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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TrueEmcee takes it up the butt!
yeah..
i like your sense of revenege throughout the poem..
it seems to me like you just bottle in ya anger 'til you explode
i liked it
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Old 01-22-2005, 04:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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lol@two piece her

Decent piece, nothing really just stood out to me. Uppin for you

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This didn't make much sense to me. Sounds like you are talking about more than one person here. Was this a quick piece because in my opinion it doesn't look like it had much effort put into it, the ideas jumped around to me. I would've liked it more if it was expanded, in both meaning and subject.
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Old 01-25-2005, 04:53 PM   #6 (permalink)
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This didn't make much sense to me. Sounds like you are talking about more than one person here. Was this a quick piece because in my opinion it doesn't look like it had much effort put into it, the ideas jumped around to me. I would've liked it more if it was expanded, in both meaning and subject.
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I reread, I donno what you're talking about with the more than one person tip.

I did write this quick, I havent wrote in like 2 years. I just got bored at the office.
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