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Old 01-16-2005, 12:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Amber

Amber stains the sky, sitting there, watching Mississippi burning,
She’s in churches chasing out the choir, her voice brings houses down,
Her sharp hand’s stroking people, listening to their skin churning,
People pray, hoping she’ll take them to the sky, as their bodies sink beyond the ground.

Amber is famous, she’s that green glow in Iraq you see on the news,
She was standing behind those people you saw jumping from the towers,
Her clothes are worn by all the famous ‘murders’, ‘terrorists’ and crews,
People scream her name when she enters clubs in the busy hours,

Amber encases all the bad guys who try to kill the Americans,
Prints a number on their and robs them of their personality,
She plays with their families back home, always making a mess of their lands,
Even though they are bad, she cleans up their town and humanity.

Some people don’t like Amber or her white friends, why? It’s a mystery,
How can you not like some one, who lights up the torch belonging to Miss Liberty?


Im not sure if we still have to comment on other for ours to stay open but im going round to peep all the same.
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Old 01-17-2005, 05:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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ah yes, thats why I dont post here no more...
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Old 01-17-2005, 06:55 AM   #3 (permalink)
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interesting very interesting i will have to think on this one and get right back to you

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Old 01-17-2005, 11:40 AM   #4 (permalink)
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The poem from the reality show.....hotness

Everyone flipped they colors very well...like a poet with a paintbrush...the results are breathtaking

this piece was classic

Wonderful Sonnet with a very unique feel to it....I will never look at amber the same

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^^ well shit there you have it. i was looking for the words but he found them for me. Thanks UFo

but he is right this was a nice piece. Thanks for showing me a new type of style.
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Old 01-18-2005, 02:34 PM   #6 (permalink)
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For some reason the very beginning of the poem made me think back to the color purple. Anyways, I was diggin this piece. Speaking truth!
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Old 01-18-2005, 02:42 PM   #7 (permalink)
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after a long thougth i got to say i loved this piece very different from what i am use to made me think i like that

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Amber encases all the bad guys who try to kill the Americans,
Prints a number on their and robs them of their personality,
She plays with their families back home, always making a mess of their lands,
Even though they are bad, she cleans up their town and humanity.


I can relate to this part alot because of the very first line in the stanza... Ive been over to Iraq and not for tourism!!!.... Bad guys trying to kill americans... very blunt and to the point but I think it fit well in this piece

btw... i wrote a piece similar to this, Ill let you see it if you want...

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For some reason the very beginning of the poem made me think back to the color purple. Anyways, I was diggin this piece. Speaking truth!
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it reminded me of Mississippi Burning

nice poem.... presented in a way I'd never think to
 
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Damn good concept man. I see UFO stated this was a poem from the reality show in the poet tree. I guess i'ma have to go check out the right of them. This was great.


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