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Old 01-14-2005, 09:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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this charasmatic voice is,engraved upon my mind.
(the voice of truth or the lies?)
confidence in presence,
memories of
predictions
unauthorized
false theories
homocide
memories charcoaled
by fumes of rotting flesh and gums..
flesh and bones
gums bleeding
so many
so hungry
fiending
for something
im fiending
for company
but the empty souls
reflecting moment is
ending abruptly
by choas that interrupts me
chaotic household,
no privacy
no breaks
constant stress
no sleep
no feelings of warmth
frozen
cold hearted
(and nobodys here)
(I stand up with)
cold shoulders
tight lipped
nights with
at large
the identity
i march with
endlessly pursuing
sleep walking
guided by my dreams
awaken by
police armed with
taser guns,
put one to their knees.
shocking discovery for some
how could this be?
they might blow ya head off,and scatter remains among debris.

revolvers and automatics,
and your favorite artist claims this with pride
but are they really aimless,and nameless,
for what it comes their time to die?
society brainwashed,
truth cant be seen by naked eye?
detached and so lost,when i gaze into vacant skies.
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Old 01-15-2005, 12:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice piece right here....the structure and format was different I liked that....the topic was abstract chaos....sounded real...lonesome at parts...and just about this crazy world...I could relate with this alot

Good job...nice lil poem....for the cause.....thank you

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Old 01-18-2005, 03:04 AM   #3 (permalink)
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This piece was fresh man. Reminded me of something lpoet would write especially the structure part. Very dark piece here. Dont think i've ever read anything from you. I'll be looking out for your next piece


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