Written Voice

Philly_215 · 01-14-2005, 01:43 PM

Do you look at the words
Analyze the diction , try to see their perspective
Listen to their vision,
Come to terms and understand their intentions

When its written do you listen
Can you hear it clear, the written voice
Did you know it was there
Spoken in different languages
Depending on what suits you
The written voice is the future

Wait and just listen,,,,
Over the noises of the streets
Or the insanity your parents speak
Beyond the comprehension of just your peers
Or the one you hold dear,
The world feels just…...

Listen
The written voice is there
Step away from the crying baby
Or the evil stares of a jealous acquaintance
Sanity awaits its here in my pages
Its there on their pads, there in their books
Their hearts speak out listen and find out

In the world of billions you aren't alone
The voice speaks to you,
welcomes you into our homes
Come we have much to speak on

UFO the Phoenix · 01-14-2005, 05:45 PM

only 2 post allowed on the board at a time

one of the MODs will close this

lpoet · 01-16-2005, 12:08 PM

^yup..

piece was nice...

Listen
The written voice is there
Step away from the crying baby
Or the evil stares of a jealous acquaintance
Sanity awaits its here in my pages
Its there on their pads, there in their books
Their hearts speak out listen and find out

nice..thought that this was dope b/c it was from a different perspective then i usually write from

Make sure u hit up some other pieces and i'm sure this will get more replies

illpoetical · 01-16-2005, 05:31 PM

i liked this alot. you kept it very retrospective and in a way it was biographical. tight piece

Philly_215 · 01-17-2005, 06:32 AM

thanks and once again sorry about posts to many poems at one time. Replies on the way for others

Playeress · 01-24-2005, 12:20 PM

Written voice

I really gotta say that the poem flowed really well and kept me interested the whole way, nice work

THE TAURUS · 01-24-2005, 06:39 PM

Good Peace
It basically spoke for itself.
It flowed nicely.
Keep hem coming.

Luther · 01-24-2005, 08:46 PM

Real cool piece here. I liked it, kinda talkin about knowing when and how to listen and speak. Sometimes I have to take the cotton out of my ears and stick it in my mouth, and I like to rant so it's not easy. They got so much things to say....

SAMARA · 01-24-2005, 11:36 PM

i likes.

01-14-2005, 01:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
Philly_215 The Silent Poet Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: some time here and sometimes there Posts: 426	Written Voice Do you look at the words Analyze the diction , try to see their perspective Listen to their vision, Come to terms and understand their intentions When its written do you listen Can you hear it clear, the written voice Did you know it was there Spoken in different languages Depending on what suits you The written voice is the future Wait and just listen,,,, Over the noises of the streets Or the insanity your parents speak Beyond the comprehension of just your peers Or the one you hold dear, The world feels just…... Listen The written voice is there Step away from the crying baby Or the evil stares of a jealous acquaintance Sanity awaits its here in my pages Its there on their pads, there in their books Their hearts speak out listen and find out In the world of billions you aren't alone The voice speaks to you, welcomes you into our homes Come we have much to speak on

01-14-2005, 05:45 PM	#2 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS! Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: Oceanside CA USA Posts: 2,965	only 2 post allowed on the board at a time one of the MODs will close this __________________ *The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:* JESUS CHRIST Oddie Sloan

01-16-2005, 12:08 PM	#3 (permalink)
lpoet POET Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 12,672	^yup.. piece was nice... Listen The written voice is there Step away from the crying baby Or the evil stares of a jealous acquaintance Sanity awaits its here in my pages Its there on their pads, there in their books Their hearts speak out listen and find out nice..thought that this was dope b/c it was from a different perspective then i usually write from Make sure u hit up some other pieces and i'm sure this will get more replies __________________ "SHE CAME BACK TO ME AND I PRAY SHE STAYS" --lpoet

01-16-2005, 05:31 PM	#4 (permalink)
illpoetical raising the bar everyday Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Long Island Posts: 1,533	i liked this alot. you kept it very retrospective and in a way it was biographical. tight piece __________________ How vain it is to sit down and write when you have not stood up to live. The skill of writing is to create a context in which other people can think.

01-24-2005, 06:39 PM	#7 (permalink)
THE TAURUS NOTHING BUT RAGE Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 18	You know who this be Good Peace It basically spoke for itself. It flowed nicely. Keep hem coming.

01-17-2005, 06:32 AM	#5 (permalink)
Philly_215 The Silent Poet Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: some time here and sometimes there Posts: 426	thanks and once again sorry about posts to many poems at one time. Replies on the way for others

01-24-2005, 12:20 PM	#6 (permalink)
Playeress Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 17	Written voice I really gotta say that the poem flowed really well and kept me interested the whole way, nice work

01-24-2005, 08:46 PM	#8 (permalink)
Luther Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 249	Real cool piece here. I liked it, kinda talkin about knowing when and how to listen and speak. Sometimes I have to take the cotton out of my ears and stick it in my mouth, and I like to rant so it's not easy. They got so much things to say.... __________________ Love of mine, someday you will die But I'll be close behind I'll follow you into the dark No blinding light, or tunnels to gates of white Just our hands clasped so tight, waiting for the hint of a spark If heaven and hell decide that they both are satisfied Illuminate the no's on their vacancy signs If there's no one beside you when your soul embarks Then I'll follow you into the dark

01-24-2005, 11:36 PM	#9 (permalink)
SAMARA myspace.com/ameliatricia Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 1,071	i likes. __________________ "… to the man who is actually in the arena... his place will never be with those timid cold souls who know neither victory nor defeat." Climbing out of the hole and leaving the whispers behind. idiom I realized the high road is idealistic and we are lowly creatures, everyone. The only difference is some are able to walk and not crawl, nor squirm on their belly. You decide.

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