Your Poem was great here, I wrote a poem dealing with the same shit not too long ago, was too personal I felt to post, but after reading this, i'll share it with you.. since we're partners and all
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To them…
You aint nothing but a party favor,
get you fucked up drop you off and call you later
whether small or greater, their love aint the same
They don’t debate your name with mine and their hearts aint stained
With love and it don’t break when you arent around
And they don’t talk to death without making sounds
To you…
I guess im just a sniveling bitch
With nothing but dreams of living it filthy and rich
But shits a miss cause im calling out and thinking of quits
Cause breakfast aint the same if you aint fixing my grits
Why the fuck did you do it? You said they were worth it
So I guess to you.. this man is totally worthless
To me …
The sun sets and rises and each day is filled with surprises
Of your smiles n niceness, All I can see is your teeth’s pearly whiteness
And the shadows carry your likeness, especially now since your dark and cold as isis
No thoughts for me, no hope for us…. never thought I’d be treated with trifeness
To them Im To you What you are to me
And I can say right now you’ve broken me whole heartedly
Apart from free, enslaved to my pain
Staying in rain, never to know the joys of holding again
The one that was to me everything you wasn’t to them
Just know you’re the one who brought about the end….
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...Take a step: one step, one dive...
...Fate is death. A leap of faith over sunset's sunrise...
...Hate is everpresent, some let love die...
...even if you laced loosely, some get tongue tied...
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10-26-2004, 02:03 PM
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