Ponder onto a world which is unkown to a mysterious magical being .... Pondering Keys

MisterEThoughts · 10-25-2004, 03:14 AM

Ponder onto a world which is unkown to a mysterious magical being ....
I suffer from longtitude of believing...
i am expressing my thoughts that combine synical connection...
Fire burning through my veins like pure extasy of fire...
burning for my desire...
I in need of something new to comprise my engery upon...
my hand shakes bewelderingly for her hand...
wanting to touch her sweet strawberry hair...
that makes me smile without despair...
Injecting the core with puriety of gratification of my moving pen....
Circular rotation of pronouncation of intoxicated red rose...
that gets spread out through the hallway like sweet mozart gentle tune....
humming the magical song inside my mind...
i can't believe i can fly...
up in the sky...
like a free bird in the sky...
hoping to touch upon a soul ....
that connects into my brain like a volipcious pain....

Keystyled a friend gave me a word Ponder and i went offf

kinda jumps around

BrokenSoul8604 · 10-25-2004, 08:59 AM

Piece was straight.

Real nice for a quick keystyle, keep it up

God Bless

MisterEThoughts · 10-25-2004, 04:50 PM

THanks bro i been practising i believe i improved quite a bit...

ManMadeofAshes · 10-25-2004, 06:21 PM

I like this peice. Hey man, my partner tooshort21 seems to be MIA. We were supposed to collab, but I am not seeing that happen. Want to be partners for the tourney? Lemme know, either pm me, or you can email me at ManMadeofAshes@aol.com or indomitabledesolation@hotmail.com. If you have an AOL account use the man made of ashes, other wise my hotmail is more reliable. peaceee.

Ashes

MisterEThoughts · 10-25-2004, 06:31 PM

thanks man sure i be your partner....get at me MisterEThoughts

MisterEThoughts · 10-26-2004, 10:30 PM

Upping....

Johnnie French · 10-27-2004, 03:09 AM

Interesting I enjoyed it.

Ponder onto a world which is unkown to a mysterious magical being ....
I suffer from longtitude of believing... I like the use of longtitude and the "unknown" world

i am expressing my thoughts that combine synical connection...
Fire burning through my veins like pure extasy of fire...
burning for my desire... This I dig cause of your selfish connection and the imagery and emotion of having fire burn through you as in a great glorious feeling. Yearning for your desires.

Fresh work man nice.

UFO the Phoenix · 10-27-2004, 04:11 AM

good for a keystyle...one of your strong areas

liked how you worked a few rhymes in here too?!?!

ponder is a good word to go off on.....haha you flipped it pretty well yo

reminded me of some kinda shakesphere or drama old school poetry for some odd reason

dont ask me?....hahahaha

stay up

PEACE AND GODBLESS

MisterEThoughts · 10-27-2004, 04:25 AM

damn man thats what i call braking that down haha man thanks bro much respect man thankss bro.....

10-28-2004, 06:50 PM

lol crazy love...
im feelin this, keyed wit emotion, although doesnt carry any specific deep meaning

finisher is nice too

hit me up @:

Too good

Sun_Flower · 10-28-2004, 07:32 PM

Upping, nicely expressed. short but str8 2 da point I feel. I enjoy'd da read.

MisterEThoughts · 10-31-2004, 01:05 AM

thank you all mad respect for sureeeeeeee

UFO the Phoenix · 10-31-2004, 01:19 AM

^yo wheres are collabo?....post it up man

MisterEThoughts · 10-31-2004, 01:50 AM

ohs shit dang man i didn't get it done ahhhh fuck ima work on it now

10-25-2004, 03:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	Ponder onto a world which is unkown to a mysterious magical being .... Pondering Keys Ponder onto a world which is unkown to a mysterious magical being .... I suffer from longtitude of believing... i am expressing my thoughts that combine synical connection... Fire burning through my veins like pure extasy of fire... burning for my desire... I in need of something new to comprise my engery upon... my hand shakes bewelderingly for her hand... wanting to touch her sweet strawberry hair... that makes me smile without despair... Injecting the core with puriety of gratification of my moving pen.... Circular rotation of pronouncation of intoxicated red rose... that gets spread out through the hallway like sweet mozart gentle tune.... humming the magical song inside my mind... i can't believe i can fly... up in the sky... like a free bird in the sky... hoping to touch upon a soul .... that connects into my brain like a volipcious pain.... Keystyled a friend gave me a word Ponder and i went offf kinda jumps around __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

10-25-2004, 08:59 AM	#2 (permalink)
BrokenSoul8604 Apparently Emotionless Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: DMI~ Posts: 705	Piece was straight. Real nice for a quick keystyle, keep it up God Bless __________________ A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness.

10-25-2004, 04:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	THanks bro i been practising i believe i improved quite a bit... __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

10-25-2004, 06:31 PM	#5 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thanks man sure i be your partner....get at me MisterEThoughts __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

10-26-2004, 10:30 PM	#6 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	Upping.... __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

10-25-2004, 06:21 PM	#4 (permalink)
ManMadeofAshes *DREAMER Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: at home Posts: 635	I like this peice. Hey man, my partner tooshort21 seems to be MIA. We were supposed to collab, but I am not seeing that happen. Want to be partners for the tourney? Lemme know, either pm me, or you can email me at ManMadeofAshes@aol.com or indomitabledesolation@hotmail.com. If you have an AOL account use the man made of ashes, other wise my hotmail is more reliable. peaceee. Ashes

10-27-2004, 04:11 AM	#8 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS! Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: Oceanside CA USA Posts: 2,965	good for a keystyle...one of your strong areas liked how you worked a few rhymes in here too?!?! ponder is a good word to go off on.....haha you flipped it pretty well yo reminded me of some kinda shakesphere or drama old school poetry for some odd reason dont ask me?....hahahaha stay up PEACE AND GODBLESS __________________ *The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:* JESUS CHRIST Oddie Sloan

10-27-2004, 04:25 AM	#9 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	damn man thats what i call braking that down haha man thanks bro much respect man thankss bro..... __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

10-28-2004, 06:50 PM	#10 (permalink)
Kaybi Guest Posts: n/a	lol crazy love... im feelin this, keyed wit emotion, although doesnt carry any specific deep meaning finisher is nice too hit me up @: Too good

10-28-2004, 07:32 PM	#11 (permalink)
Sun_Flower Bluez By Loves Eye Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 640	Upping, nicely expressed. short but str8 2 da point I feel. I enjoy'd da read. __________________ The intimate rhythms of life... Moonlit in my eyes Illuminate this mystic divine Blinding sights that taunt’s for life

10-31-2004, 01:05 AM	#12 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thank you all mad respect for sureeeeeeee __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

10-31-2004, 01:19 AM	#13 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS! Join Date: Aug 1999 Location: Oceanside CA USA Posts: 2,965	^yo wheres are collabo?....post it up man __________________ *The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:* JESUS CHRIST Oddie Sloan

10-31-2004, 01:50 AM	#14 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	ohs shit dang man i didn't get it done ahhhh fuck ima work on it now __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

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