"Lady Liquid" ft. UFO

[Tripl3]

yellow=UFO
white=Tripl3

She moves like liquid
Mysterious mistress exclusive
This chick read my thoughts
Red shoes exquisite
Footprints leaving secrets when she walks
I fought to catch my breath
Drowning in her movements
My eyes visit hers and become lost
Honey dip had curves that could toss
The ocean adjacent to the sun
Golden sugar sweet lipstick
With honeycombs for bracelets
I've fallen in the trap-oasis and now I'm caught
Like the fly that gets to close to the arachnids art
Besides she had hair like spider-webs
That's been decorated and finger-painted by Indians
The gods hide her head
If you were lucky to see her face
You found happiness
Left stun from her earrings
That hung like electric eels
Sparkling off the sunset
She had looks to kill
And all my skills could not wield her very interest
This stranger crossed my path
And tattooed her beautiful to my mental photograph
She's become num to my love poems
My spoken art only broke her heart
Into tiny crystals that echo across the scarlet sky
I tend to make complex mistakes
Out of something so simple
Keeping my true feelings hidden inside
My fingertips can never get a grip on miss lady liquid
I smile and wave like an idiot as she passes me by....

Streaming blonde hair with eyes of an angel…
A sore sight for the Devil, precious through any angle…
Her lips taste like the sweet juices of Heaven…
But only in my mind…
And only when I have time to heal, on the 7th…
Her touch caresses mine and I start to tear…
For how can something I know I feel be not there?…
Her smile is of God’s, and with her I know no fear…
But she resides in my mind…
When I sleep, or whenever else I close my eyes…
And I never wish to wake…
Just to stay embedded in today…
But I see her oh so clearly…
And when shes in my arms, I feel oh so weary…
And sometimes I contemplate living…
Because if I passed today…
We could live forever in Heaven as one being…
All I treasure is these pictures in which she is Queen…
Like a mirage in which I cant comprehend full meaning…
God, why must you be so wicked?…
To tease and taunt me with my Lady Liquid…

[SmokeyMcBluff]

FUCKIN A!!!!!this truly blew my mind...so vivid and descriptive...i felt like i was part of this...niether verse lacked at any moment thru this...

This stranger crossed my path
And tattooed her beautiful to my mental photograph
She's become num to my love poems
My spoken art only broke her heart
Into tiny crystals that echo across the scarlet sky
I tend to make complex mistakes
Out of something so simple

WHAT!!!!MY GOD MAN...

Her touch caresses mine and I start to tear…
For how can something I know I feel be not there?…
Her smile is of God’s, and with her I know no fear…
But she resides in my mind…
When I sleep, or whenever else I close my eyes…
And I never wish to wake…
Just to stay embedded in today…

just fuckin exquisite...im goin thru this right now and i can totally feel the essence of every word...thank you guys for this.

[MisterEThoughts]

WOW why are people sleeping man damn this was hot real nice collab you two... this really did blow my mind haha the images the wordplay everything man this was pure fire i am digging the topic lady liquid real hot real hot.... do another one you two you did well...

[SmokeyMcBluff]

2nd the motion for another one from you guys...lol

[BrokenSoul8604]

yea, this piece was definately incredible....ufo, your imagery was outstanding....and i could feel tripl3s raw emotion...you both worked as one unit on this one....and it turned out fantastic,..

you should collab like once a week or somethin lol

God Bless

[InTheStars]

I thought that this was really tight. Both peices flowed so well together, and the imagery was amazing yet mistic in a way. Sorta unrealistic, but magical, either way it definately worked. Great peice by both.

LOVING IT

[Tripl3]

appreciate the responses...

glad I saw this cuz it was DOPE, all capitals intended.

UFO, I knew you were an up and coming poetical star on the rise. You got me this week in the Poet Tree playboy. nice poem here, very descriptive and your vocab with the details of her are nicely brought together to paint the complete picture. the imagery of it was as great as everybody is saying it was, but it also had a mysterious/provacative vibe like this girl was a hidden obsession of yours or something.

Tripl3, your attachment to the mysterious lady seems to be more deluded like your hyptnotized by the idea of the 'liquid lady' and you phiend for her. I liked the flow and it carried the words smoothly throughout your part.

Her smile is of God’s, and with her I know no fear…
But she resides in my mind…
When I sleep, or whenever else I close my eyes…
And I never wish to wake…
Just to stay embedded in today…
But I see her oh so clearly…
And when shes in my arms, I feel oh so weary…
And sometimes I contemplate living…
Because if I passed today…
We could live forever in Heaven as one being…
All I treasure is these pictures in which she is Queen

niceness all the way man

[UFO the Phoenix]

^wooooord up

thanks for the love ya'll

Tripl you crazy ill yo get at me....(that blind love poem has still got me buggin)

[Psycho69]

This was Amazing. You both came and put something incredible together. I loved UFO's descriptions and I was really liking Tripl's flow... it just came out awesome, I'm not much for critiquing, I'll just say I fucking loved it lol.

Great job.

[Tripl3]

word, appreciate the responses yall...drop ya links too if u got em...

UFO, I'll holla, we gotta collab some more...

[Chase Murda]

shit was off the hook good shit do another one for the kid

[Tripl3]

appreciate it...