My first kill (rabbit hunting)

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Old 10-04-2004, 02:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My first kill (rabbit hunting)

It was cold outside, a pretty bad winter./
Holding onto my BB gun, in the middle of December./
I went to check my traps, for animals or prey./
I could see my breath, but could here no sound that day./
Now I'm in the middle of the woods, all by myself./
Feeling pretty good, adventerous as hell./
The air was clean, with fresh snow on the ground./
With each and every step, there would be a crackle sound./
It was around 11 o' clock, and I was off wabbit hunting./
when outta the corner of my eye, I seen movement or something./
The next thing I knew, I had caught a rabbit in my trap./
I was too excited to think, it was whimpering in fact./
This surprised me, but I knew what had to be done./
The rabbit was light gray, it's cuteness had me stunned./
I grabbed my BB gun, and pumped it three or four times./
Aimed it at the rabbit, and shot it between the eyes./
I was surprised it didn't die, and the rabbit began to cry./
It sounded like a human baby, that was struggling to survive./
This hurt, because the rabbit was so pure./
I think it knew what was happening, cuz' in it's eyes I saw fear./
I had to do it, I couldn't just leave it in my trap./
After the first shot, there was no turning back./
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Old 10-04-2004, 03:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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awwww....man this was very graphic and real....good description brings the reader right into the scene of this event

kinda hitting close to home since my sister has a pet rabbit

interesting poem...seemed like a keystyle something that was just thrown together but I'm glad you decided to share it with us

first time checking you out I thinK?

keep em coming...dont forget to peep other poets

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Old 10-04-2004, 12:05 PM   #3 (permalink)
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ehh....cant lie.......this one didnt move me at all....

unique piece to write about, and i mean no disrespect, but i just wasnt in to it..

thats about it....

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Thanks for tellin' the truth..

yeah this was a keystyle, ha ha I was just thinking that when rabbits cry they sound like human babies, and I rememberd the first rabbit I killed when I was like 9 or something.. Just testing my descriptive capabilities..
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Old 10-05-2004, 02:51 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Yeah rabbits do sound like little babies when you hurt them. My grandmother use to have a vegetable garden when I was younger, and there was always rabbits coming into the yard fuckin up her shit. My grandpappy would always sit out back and shot at them and then cook them. Nasty shit man.

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Good looking everybody.. I'm gonna hit everybody who responds back tommorow.. Just been hella busy with this homework and all... But thanks, I'll get to your posts when I get time..
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this was nice for a keystyle nice little rhyme nice description haven't been hunting but now that i read this i don't think i will....
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