Shhhhhhhhhhhh [tenative title]

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Old 10-03-2004, 08:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Shhhhhhhhhhhh [tenative title]
I feel this poem is very important with how we live our life. Even though this is an older poem.



Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Stop for a moment close your eyes
Tell me where did you go?
Was there hell in your sights?
Or was it heavenly?
Was it your wife or children that smiled at you?
That lost relative that you always wish you had with you
Was it your favorite toy?
Perhaps your puppy that you had when you were young
Was it the most beautiful thing you've ever witness
Cascades of water tumbling all around
Fresh smells trickling in your nasal
The lush green jungle densely around you
Maybe it was hell on earth
War, Violence, Drugs, Killing your own family
Red has painted the sky's final days
Red has painted the streets
Red finally painting your hands
Maybe it was just black......
You know leaving you open for thought
I mean you really want to be caught in hell
or the demons on earth?
Maybe you want to be lost in an Amazon jungle?
If you’re like me you value your life and your home
I mean think how is it that you wish you were dead huh?
How is it that you want to leave your residence?
You know it makes you feel like you can lift the world from Atlas
And Take on the troubles flung at you
Well look I know you saw something black or anything else
Just remember though you need to stop
Relax and close your eyes cause life moves by as fast as this poem.........
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Old 10-03-2004, 09:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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"Maybe it was hell on earth
War, Violence, Drugs, Killing your own family
Red has painted the sky's final days"

Damn, those three lines were powerful, and very vivid. You used the right words in this to describe what was on your mind.

The end is nice too man. Good stuff..
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Old 10-04-2004, 03:05 AM   #3 (permalink)
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*reading for the second time*

ok now I'm taking something else from this piece after RE-READING it...interesting?

I love your work man...very talented poet

"Fresh smells trickling in your nasal
The lush green jungle densely around you"

very descriptive in all areas....like you was telling me...I feel ya

and this is some of your old stuff???...man

I like this alot...I probably have to re-read it again to learn something else...lol

Keep em coming man don't hold out on us

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Old 10-05-2004, 12:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Word, this piece was dope. I mean I can't relate to every line, but I feel everybody can relate to at least one piece of this poem. Insightful drop man.

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^Mos def this was something very insightful. Fucked up it's gettin no replies though. Uppin for you.

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