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Old 10-03-2004, 05:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Sucka Attack!

SUCKA ATTACK
A 6FTGROUND definition…..

I give my indistinguishable partner 500 dollars
to have and spend as she may
Giving her space to do as she may
She goes out to play with her girls
At the same club….

How was I suppose to know she would be at the same club;
The same club I went out to, with Tyrone
Yeah! I used Tyrone phone to call you and remind you to…
respect you and what we have in a day..
respect what we have in our lives
respect what we do in our silk covered bedroom
with mirrors on ceilings and solid red oak bed
next to the night stand, holding golden
framed images of us everlasting…
I trust you love!
I trust your love
Looking down at her with drink in hand
Sipping a fine cognac

I didn’t tell her where I was
At the same club sitting low key
Above sipping fine cognac
Looking down on her dancing seductively with a thug
Damn did she just do that!?!
She grabbed her ankles while a thug
thrashes from the back
She Dropped down and getting her eagle on
And that’s when I flashed back like a best man act:
a image of the thug looking
up smiling silently mouthing
Thank you sucka she gave me that something
that amounts to your heart thumping.

Maybe I’m sick… but
could she
have done the same acts she did with me
At home in-between the silk sheets
watching each other in the` above mirrors
tears and more tears gave me the clue
to the truth she’s sleuth………Will I ever for give her?
2 b Continued…. Sigh
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Old 10-03-2004, 06:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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dayum.... this is the worst kinda hurt....

i loved the piece, and cant wait for part two....The realms own soap opera...keep it comin...

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man oh man talk about drama...this was twisted and very real

different perspective of the who being cheated on poems

that one line:

"And that’s when I flashed back like a best man act:"

lol...I remember that movie best man and when he has those flashbacks...talk about messing with your head...lol....very creative to add that in this

good poem

curious to see what happens in part 2

stay up

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this shit is dope

Thank you sucka she gave me that something
that amounts to your heart thumping.

Maybe I’m sick

man...that shit had me like..damn..i really felt this piece
u desribed exactaly how i would prolly feel if i saw my girl doing some shit like that

my fucking heart would just melt...

cant wait for the next joint..

fire shit
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Piece was dope man. I prolly would have had to go upside somebodys head with a bottle though.


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SUCKA ATTACK
A 6FTGROUND definition…..

I give my indistinguishable partner 500 dollars
to have and spend as she may
Giving her space to do as she may
She goes out to play with her girls
At the same club….

How was I suppose to know she would be at the same club;
The same club I went out to, with Tyrone
Yeah! I used Tyrone phone to call you and remind you to…
respect you and what we have in a day..
respect what we have in our lives
respect what we do in our silk covered bedroom
with mirrors on ceilings and solid red oak bed
next to the night stand, holding golden
framed images of us everlasting…
I trust you love!
I trust your love
Looking down at her with drink in hand
Sipping a fine cognac

I didn’t tell her where I was
At the same club sitting low key
Above sipping fine cognac
Looking down on her dancing seductively with a thug
Damn did she just do that!?!
She grabbed her ankles while a thug
thrashes from the back
She Dropped down and getting her eagle on
And that’s when I flashed back like a best man act:
a image of the thug looking
up smiling silently mouthing
Thank you sucka she gave me that something
that amounts to your heart thumping.

Maybe I’m sick… but
could she
have done the same acts she did with me
At home in-between the silk sheets
watching each other in the` above mirrors
tears and more tears gave me the clue
to the truth she’s sleuth………Will I ever for give her?
2 b Continued…. Sigh
SUCKA ATTACK
A 6FTGROUND definition….. Continued

The days went on, as did the nights
sex was short and satisfying for her…
with every breath for he… was staggering
His chest hurting with pressures building
To a raze from images…
A best mans groom couldn’t escape….
So I…
BREATH 1 AND TO THE 2
2 AND TO THE 3.. BREATH

Continuos, our arguing stands,
Sustained for the truth
no longer indigenous..
truth was expelled when she admitted to
Images… in head of her accuser..
**PICTURE THIS**
Thugs grabbing and groping her
as if familiar with her bodies climatic spots
her grabbing her ankles and bending over
enticing her mate who is me ~~
but not!
just a prop in my spot taking shots at
what was mine and now what is tainted;
his to be maybe!?!…
Yes I’m heated yes indeed
I saw everything above at the club
I’m plastered and no where to go like my feelings
I’m far from healing
the tainted frame of my significant other
holds a passion marked for her deletion
Just above her belly button which lye concealed
From me while in heat under nightfall flesh is hard?
To see clearly; just when the morning came
I played sleep
she went to pee and shower thinking I’m sleep
I awake with images of her sleuth ways
And I march up to the shower like psycho
Sustained for the truth
no longer indigenous..
truth was expelled when she admitted to
Images… in head of her accuser..

How could you after 3 years of I love you?
Could it be the seven we have between
Or the love making… with out the roughing
Maybe this is why the sudden change
The different moan tones and aggressive instructions
So tell me whore did you sleep with this man while we were
sEPARATED…
She said “YES”…………. GET the HELL OUT!





……. It hurts so badly, so thus the introduction
brings me to my knees…….. Alone I am… in my
room smelling the sheets, running to brush my tongue and teeth;
gargling with peroxide foaming to an earl OF AN…
A SUKER ATTACK…..
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Old 10-05-2004, 07:34 PM   #7 (permalink)
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^Fool what are you doing? Put the poem into another thread, nobody is gonna see this man. If you got two poems up just wait lol.
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