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Old 10-03-2004, 05:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Grey
Colors fade for no good reason
Grey is how I feel,
like the sleeves my arms bleed in
Depictions
of how one should be,
results in this deranged society
Expectations never met
heads filled with agony and regret
I close my mind,
hide inside myself and imagine
my body being made numb,
escaping this internal ache
This world I wish to forsake,
leave you all in the past,
pass you by,
Done trying to conform to this contrast

I'm new.. Quotive's friend.. If any of you read the poem he posted that he wrote with me awhile back... yeah, I'm that friend lol.. *nods*
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Old 10-03-2004, 05:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Yeahhhh!!!!!!!! MY BEST FRIEND IS HERE!!! Sup pimpin'?

Anyways.. I like this poem, never broke it down so here lol..

"I close my mind,
hide inside myself and imagine
my body being made numb,
escaping this internal ache"

Those are my favorite lines.. reminds me of "Yesterday's Feelings" by the Used.. which you should listen to : )

Maybe we can do another collabo.. hehe.. see yaaa pimpin'..
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welcome to the realm...quos friend....likin the piece....

imagery is nice....and i was diggin the flow....again quo beat me to the quote but i guess thats ok....

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Old 10-04-2004, 04:57 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Gray is my favorite color. Really can relate to this piece here, write tons of things just like this. Feeling the structure you wrote this piece in also. Welcome to the realm, hope you like what you see...and stick around .


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Old 10-04-2004, 10:41 AM   #5 (permalink)
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nice lil poem here...another one huh this was cool...I like the color grey too...but I dont use it much in my writing or in my style of cloths

interesting style...I like your description and word-choice

keep these poems coming and I'll keep responing with feedback

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Man i am relating quite a bit i felt this real hard i feel gray too i like the word usage real nice....
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