Seven Portals That Flower Human Existence

[flamingshepherd]

Seven portals that flower human existence
Into the wine of experience is bore the unified allegiance,
Through right leadership casted to step into the days law,
That bears the education of the populous through the definitive word,
Breathing communicatively stemming to blossom the birth
Waxing the artists creative coalition that binds philosophies and the vision,
Bearing the sciences of the concrete mind to bud the technologies of the day,
Wearing the vestiges of the soul in a religious inclination and devotion sensed
Promising the rites of economy and finances decreed for civilizations growth,
When all is said and brought together in synergy we witness the synthetic birthouse.

Walking in the rays of the Sun we find the sciences of the Son becoming
Beckoning the knower on to higher grounds and keener planes,
To activate the observer towards the mold of the actors realm
Where abiding in the shadows dwells futures bright fate,
And the consequence of evolutions song
Treading onward manifesting the path of the day,
Seeding the soil of your tomorrows from the hand that scatters seed in the now
Lives the secret life of symbols and their meanings.

Youth calls onto the worker the decree that moves the hand of One
Flashing intuition burgeoning the soul of the day,
Spiraling the witness to the womb of time,
Manifests the matrix of the epoch known as the Omega,
Destroyer of the limitation that stands before brethren,
For in its wake lived the memory of the enchanting periphery,
But now in the movement of the Master lives the ungated joys of the horizon
Which live at the fringes of the mind of every man.
Culled from the precept which carried the limitation
Lives now the freedom of vaster affection,
Which when tasted bears the bitter wine that is sweet to the belly.

Splendour steps take root to become the light of day,
Minstrels wear their rags made of ether
And the offerances of time blossom in the bosom of the Mother,
Only to be bade nourishment in the purse of the infant
Which builds the actor towards the goals of their precision,
And steps towards the unknown of futures bright answers
The mix of choice and placement to pulse the dawn of child,
Upon the face of the deep mortal coil of Time
Sprouts the immortal that is woven with the fabric of the Sun,
Where each ray is a varied hue that represents a pillar of man
Whose subsistence is rooted in the philosophies of Life,
Closely allied with the recognition from the Witnesses from on High
Bears the wand of the magician who conducts his symphonic path
And calls forth by its waving the children of the Creator to become themselves greater.....................

SEPTEMBER 24, 2004

5:17 A.M.

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[Quotive]

Damn.. I couldn't even get into this. I got the message but fuck.. its long, and some lacks stuff that comes along with the beginning.

Your thoughts seemed to revolve around the "Son/Sun" a lot.. hmm.. I'm sure someone will like it I just couldn't get into it.

[DaJackle]

wow...this has a lot of deep images...very complex images...abstract images...i like how the poem progresses a lot...you branched out through out the topic and then came back to its original form...and the repetition of the "Sun" images really glued that together...sun blooming the human existance...sun being our pillar of existance...and the play on word in the beginning...i just realized what you did...good drop...great internal rhymes that created a steady feel to the piece...take care...piece

[BrokenSoul8604]

i agree with both quotive and jackle...

1st of all i cant get into long pieces....not your fault...its mine

second....the piece was pretty ill
lotta abstract images...but the imagery was off the hook

its something im gonna have to work on.....

God Bless

[UFO the Phoenix]

oooh

kay

this was maybe a lil too abstract for me...this poem was good but its one of those I would perfer to hear live...this should be in a spoken word audio...because I can hear you either screaming this with emotions or whispering certain parts...just has its own voice to it you know???

hard to explain but I highly recommend you record this

interesting concept just hard to follow on paper

stay up...keep it abstract but simple

lol

PEACE AND GODBLESS

[flamingshepherd]

I emcee a local open mic in Port Huron, MI. North of Detriot 35-40 min.
I also at the end of the night perform some of my peices. Tonight I performed this for the first time in a public location, besides to my mom, and friends at the art studio. I am particularly pleased with this experience that I had, referring to the writing of it, quite mind expanding. The performing of it put different dimension to it, color and shape. Hopefully it is either golden or resplendent white.....hahaha.
Appreciate the replys, thank you I am gracious of your words and time.....peace peers! [heart] [heart] .+. .+. .+.

[Dcipher]

nice piece man, fa'real-
i like writings that force your mind to think- get ya wheels turnin, philosophisin'
...attempting to "Dcipher" life, you know? Deep ish- Nuff respect-
you are obviously an intelligent artist who views life alot more deeply than what is presented on the surface- you painted a series of deep mental pictures-
nice nice writing. i do agree with the last reply that this would sound off tha hook articulated live-

oh- i replied to your reply on my post "Conversations with God"-
peep it

PeezOut

[Dcipher]

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