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Old 09-12-2004, 06:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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the last days
the last days

I bite the rope and stair
Tap the needle and inject the nightmare
I see the Devil everywhere
Is God even out there
No home no rest no peace
No food no hope no release
war within us war in the Middle East
I sleep with dollar bills and the beast
the world is filled with loathing and erosion
extortion and corrosion
pain and fear from emotions
peace and joy no more
I love weak women I love whores
I love weak men I love war
I love the truth but I love when you ignore
a broken nation is all I ask for
solid devastation is harder
glorification of an anti-martyr
push the button damnation starter
I drop bombs like bird shit
politicians i know you heard it
I’ll take your crucifix and invert it

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Old 09-12-2004, 06:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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yo i liked that , i thought it was pretty good
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Old 09-13-2004, 12:23 AM   #3 (permalink)
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shits nice...i actually was going to respond with a poem but the shit was kinda stupid

really good shit here though..wish it were longer...
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Old 09-14-2004, 03:28 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!
Thought this would make a nice spoken word joint, but it was too short. Shit was nice though, you were really blunt with your thoughts.


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Old 09-14-2004, 06:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I love weak women I love whores
I love weak men I love war
^Whaaaat^ good comeback to that line. I agree also about this becoming a spoken word-I could vision the emotion so strong while it being read, just escalating with the such powerful message, I like that- real good here. Great opening lines as well, you're good.
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I love the flow and sturcture of how you illustrate such current status.... Nicely done!
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Old 09-17-2004, 12:31 PM   #7 (permalink)
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love the way u put down your piece.
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Nowadays I flow lesser but a professor takes pro juice
And introduce cats to knowledge and turn stats from college a loose
That bats some garbage away from the minds and scum declines
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