Wrongfully pursued...El Poet/Lyrical Sorcery

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Old 07-22-2004, 03:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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confusing my mind
searching for truth by persuing the lies....
media isn't helping
they're just some fools wearing ties
the fued is disguised...
by politicians and cowardly ways
everybody is killing for money
to gain some power and praise...
I put flowers by graves
for all the people that have lost their life
don't know their names
but feel their pains in these awful fights

Children dieing so young,
these parents have to barry their babies....
I think of my daughter and cry
because things are so terrible lately...
I can't imagine what I'd do
if she was taken from me.....
but I'm already loosing my mind....
I can't escape what I've seen

Money... the root of evil
look at what it can do to people...
strangers becoming enemies
to the point that fueds are leathal.
all this violence and terror...
I stare into my eyes through the mirror
and hope for a peaceful moment
to be applied with our neighbors


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as we search for true meaning,so much shit seems so deceiving
politicians give us their so called "wisdom" and choke us til were barely breathing...
children die so young,they are forced to grow up so fast....
the enemy at times,becomes are own selves, still living in our past my heart has been shaded partially black due to my own self destruction....
searching for true answers from the "wise ones" but theyll never let us confront them
they know our ideas and dreams as nonsense,cuz they say were not "important".....
but whats "important" is to point out all the over grown fetuses that so often become aborted
in our misfortunes,we find an hourglass that is slowly ticking down our seconds for rekindling our hope and dreams
they say our childrens hopes arent important though,cuz they are the ones that only possess the "expertise"
so at nights we hear screams but of course,all left unanswered....
i can no longer block out the senseless violence that has led to our earth's cancer
so they say that we are hypocrits....we turn to drugs and alcohol to try to interchange the bitterness
burning inside our hearts and minds....still hoping for "lost benefits" we struggle solemnly as parts of a sinister galaxy......we have strong hearts,strong minds,shattered souls,and so many of us could become fatalities....
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Old 07-22-2004, 04:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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really takes it up the butt!
Right on. Very clearly stated. I hope it gets better.
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Old 07-22-2004, 04:42 PM   #3 (permalink)
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tooshort21 takes it up the butt!
I stare into my eyes through the mirror
and hope for a peaceful moment
to be applied with our neighbors

awesome....awesome good job dawg... love the ending

eloq poet....

wow i didnt even get far into your piece and i can quote already!!!!

as we search for true meaning,so much shit seems so deceiving
politicians give us their so called "wisdom" and choke us til were barely breathing...

powerful and used very well... mad props on this collab

although i think that lyrical sauce's piece could of used some spelling corrections and overall grammar checks!!

overall it was a very well done piece....
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Old 07-22-2004, 11:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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concept was excellent...

first joint about this that i've read here in the realm

shit was fire

I put flowers by graves

..for some reason that really stood out to me..reminds me of fallin soldiers..

and el poet
the enemy at times,becomes are own selves

...couldnt have said it better myself

good job u 2..loved the piece
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Old 07-23-2004, 11:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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A well thought out piece. Both of you came strong. Both pointed out how the children of today are dying so soon, it's ugly. Elouqent I dont think I never seen you write in that way (the structure), it kinda threw me off. Great collab.


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Old 07-28-2004, 05:27 PM   #7 (permalink)
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why are you always spelling my name wrong too short, it's SORCERY, and that is how it's correctly spelled... and always hating on my work... spelling corrections and grammar.. lmao


I hadn't even read EP's part of this since I sent him my half about a month ago, but that was definately dope

we should do more shit together.... and sorry I missed our battle in the rstl man.... I wrote it, but got into a car accident and couldn't post it cuz I was in emergency, but I'm cool now

ne way... nice shit man and thanks everybody
 
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