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Old 07-22-2004, 05:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I did it.

I was inspired by the tourney topics. But I don't really care to compare my crap to any of that. So Ima just post it here.

I used to think tragedies
had such horrible endings
I didn't want to believe
in the evil impending
But I was just blissful
and actively sending
My Ignorant signal
But I always continued extending
my pituitary vision
Ever since that miserable day
When I had to awaken to Tragedies ways

My
only
fault I guess
was settling
for less than the truth
Totally Ignorant
inside of some voting booth
But I still had to make a choice
Many Moons later I finally
Realize that Democracy is gone
As another brick in the wall, I
Will never feel like I belong
the corner stone who's refused
By that wall of refuse
which over time will
crumble and Fall
and humpty
too will
Fall

The tragic end of that solid wall,
was also a triumph for
All of us
Except for the fools who prefer the fuss
Broken in the rubble
soon to be dust
Abusing their privilage
And not prepared for the Gust
of the breath of Justice
and they will never be missed.

Believe the truisms in this rarefied tale
The truest tragedy is my fading trail
that will lead the true seekers
to that matterless Garden
While all of the other paths
will only make your Heart harden
For I built the soul-cycle
And you may dominate the ground
But eventually they all Regret
Wanting to stick around
So now you're back
To immersion in the jibberish wishes
They are screaming their pitiful, Disonant sound
The best advice I have is just simmer down
Weren't you just here?
What kind of Dream are you living in now?
Could our lives really be Hell?
Please tell us what you found here trapped on tha ground
Within the belly of your town,
They are all held down
by that Gravitational force
that keeps them pinned to the Ground

And I realize it's all just a tragedy
because they consistently refuse
my free-your-mind cues
As if that's what they had been programmed to do
So Instead they all choose
Some favorite poison to abuse
But I can never really hate them
over some miniscule bruise
The truths do make it through
And we can see that a great many are called
But those who will make it are only a few
And so I rejoice
because they made the right choice
And on the special occasions
we make a joyful noise
Singing in Unison
Despite the Distance of the seperation
In the kingdom of God
we are that One nation
We are the only
Ones.
who can teach you
the things that are true
While you are coming of age
Please, Please remember
All those things that we knew
Even before we were reminded
That we've been looking for you
Because Everyone Knows
that it would be horribly tragic
If you just flew back Home
without using your magick.

All the stones in the yard
that the builders refused
have reached their final verdict
But the sentencing of Ravana is all up to you
Because he has spread unprescedented amounts
of the wicked world weeds and everyOne counts
This is what we've been calling your Divine will
The Instant Karma and delayed, alike
Are never forgotten; Just like riding a bike
He will reap what he sows
Because that's just how it goes
And only you know who is his friend or his foe

Jack's House is falling
while that Bad Wolf will blow
And Let Us All become fully Aware
Completely averting Sun Tzu's methods of warfare
As they were recorded in print, for someone who cares
War is deception, and Life isn't fair
that is their mantra and they have only one prayer
They secretly speak to the God they perceive
"Please God, Destroy me, It's just what I need,
Please help me to satisfy my
indefensible greed,
if you're not going to do it
then I'll make us all bleed,
Fuck You Goddamnit."
And I think I understand
why you gave them no reply
because the birds are the Ones
who were given the sky
And the Dogs and the Cows
are preparing to fly
If Ravana really wants to
I'd say give it a try
Jump from the Top of the Temple
that he erected to honor himself
Maybe he'll find his New wings
if he could only let go of his wealth
But Alas, It's not so; His fall will be slow
What makes him so guilty is that
all this he knows
And still he chooses to exploit his own mother
And goes undercover to destroy his own brother
He was promised immunity from the swords of the spirits
But he is not really protected from any of the others
And that's why he compensates by talking Big Game
And he is terrified of you because you know his name
And if he should ever confront you
Don't buy the lies that he holds in his brain
He's a professional liar who's been properly trained
to deceive any person he perceives to be weak
And he's almost always successful at possessing the meek
So those multitudes are converted from
the living to dead
and it's all because they believed
what the bitter soul said
Push it out of your head
And remember instead
all those truth inspired books that you've read
And try not to focus on those feelings of dread
Recall the end of the Fable where his veins will be bled
Until that beautifully demonic Face is pale white,
without any more traces of the red
And instead of him passing into the kingdom God Head
he will try to invade the living, lying, Dreaming in Bed
which has worked for him before
But EveryOne that used to love this game
Has grown tired of trying to keep the score
So his 15min. of Fame is now replaced by his shame
Without a permit into any realm
The Nothing will overwhelm
his broken spirit, and he is right to fear it
The nothing consumes his soul, and his name is finally Erased
All he had to do was admire the penitent power Of God's amazing grace
But he ego-tripped up to the gates of hell
And what we've always known was brought forth from the shell
that he made to hide the things inside
that would cause his guilt to override his pride,
But this available Redemption Ravana denied
He believed that he would never even want to confide
but he did; just before he died
for the wages of sin is Death
And I will never be able to forget the sorrowful tears you cried
which you have never been ashamed of or felt the need to hide.
You've never even tried.
That's the reason why I try to prove to you
That I am on your side
You and I are inextricably tied.
And I always recognize you, because you never lie.
In my darkest hours you got me by
and when I'm doing well
You're lifting me high
all the way up until I'm a part of the sky.
And I liked to call myself Icarus,
who dreamt that he could fly to the sun
but his physical wings failed
and his story was done.
But you were with me, on every side
and I've never had to take that fall
and you've promised me that we'll never brawl
I heard you call from my bedroom wall
When I was barely reaching 4ft. tall
And since that time I have always believed
Inside of my life you are always received
And with your assisstance your truth is perceived
And all of your warnings I have tried to heed
because I wouldn't want to ruin our creed
I now know, in life, you are all that I need
And I will carry you with me until they are freed
Moving through time with your super Godspeed
And I want to sing your praises through all of my deeds
If you should need a body to be,
help me prepare the world for my seed
so that you may come to fullfill the Dreams
of all of the One's who will still believe.
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Old 07-22-2004, 05:36 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Fin....

I
will know
where you are
you can never
get out very far
without a guide out there
A Face made of light arrives
This is the One you requested
And you just Know that you can trust
You are led to the gates of heaven next
And an Angel says that there is nothing
that you could ever do in Life
that the Force would call a sin
You are on a mission
And the gates will part
for the person
who will go
where God
leads

Why did this poem
want to take on this form?
Why does it insist
on escaping the norm?
When will we be able
to not be forlorn?
I say,
As soon as you know
that all babies are born
in the eye of an urban storm
Where our hearts are too often torn
But hope is a good thing
And is favoured by our Queen and King
And out of everything that you now own
hope is the only thing that you will be allowed to bring
when you return to that place
from whence you came
And it may all be a tragedy
but it is Epic for sure
and it resonates like a tuning fork
This may be the cure.
So the story shall be called a tragedy
But it shall be classified as entertainment.
good luck.......
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Old 07-22-2004, 11:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Wow, I can't believe you haven't yet closed it. Maybe this was just overlooked. I dunno.
Any feedback would be appreciated, but if you think that you should close this...Go right ahead. I guess I should make replies, but I'm in more of an output mode right now. I don't really feel like pondering others pieces now. Besides most of the ones on top are the ones I've already read and replied to, accordingly. Thanks for leaving it open for a while to give someone a chance to sneak a reply in before the inevitable.

On another note, I've noticed something in my writing. It started a long time ago. I capitalize certain words, and I remember when I was around 17 I tried to justify why I capitalized certain things. I told myself it was because it seemed important. But here lately, my hands just go to the shift key sometimes. It's like I'm subconsciously choosing the words to capitalize. Maybe, I'm just a weirdo. It's pointless to try and figure me out.
Anyways, I was reading this over again and I started reading just the capitalized words and in most cases it was jibberish of Articles, but there was also some things that were interesting. Im just gonna forget about it and just write though. okay uppin to see a reaction.
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Old 07-22-2004, 11:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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