AN ODE to GHETTOQUEEN

This is a discussion on AN ODE to GHETTOQUEEN within the Poetry Realm forums, part of the Intellect Zone category; http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...58#post9523458 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...63#post9523463 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...73#post9523473 An ode to lymelite Lyme is as pleasant to look at as meadows and seas / Immersed ...


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Old 07-19-2004, 07:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
 
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AN ODE to LymeLite part 1
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...58#post9523458

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...63#post9523463

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...73#post9523473

An ode to lymelite

Lyme is as pleasant to look at as meadows and seas /
Immersed in her unparalleled eyes one forgets death, foes, and disease /
I let go my needs to see such beauty /
Divinity embodied in your framework with the symmetry of masons /
To get just one gaze in your goddess like face is /
Worth a man’s existence /
Just the mere touch of your hands is Zen
Inside your soul is the vision of a pure wisdom that few can replicate /
To you I offer endless praise /
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Old 07-20-2004, 04:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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hehe.. well this is intresting. Not what I expected, but not something I didnt enjoy. Short and sweet, very nice vocabulary (are you educated or something.. cause thats quite strange.. hmm.. maybe I just read too much shit on this site) but yea.. this is definately not the same ol' shit. Pretty short, .. wonder if this is why no ones givin replys?

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this was an excellent piece, it really showcased the beauty of ghettoqueen69 in a literary and poetic form. Quite impressive young man.
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^I guess you thought you was under your alias when you made that post?
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it's alright, but I've read better dedications...true beauty though, cannot be defined by words nor explained by them either...but it's cool I guess...
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All dumb shyt aside...

The piece was cool. I've never really seen your style before, its like a mixture of poetry, and rap... its pretty cool.

"Inside your soul is the vision of a pure wisdom that few can replicate"

Diggin' that line. The internal rhymes were cool, multies would help. But yo, stay up. Keep writin'.
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stay up???? I been in the game son, this is just a new rm name. Thanks though for the support. This was a freestyle to see what ghettoqueen would say, I did not put time nor effort into it.
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