Blissful Darkness

This is a discussion on Blissful Darkness within the Poetry Realm forums, part of the Intellect Zone category; http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=770524 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...73#post9522873 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...24#post9522924 I sat in the chair pondering wondering, While the sky out beyond was crying and thundering. I ...


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Old 07-19-2004, 06:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I sat in the chair pondering wondering,
While the sky out beyond was crying and thundering.
I saw the darkness around me and it set me at ease,
This was no violent darkness,
One that possesses some sort of element of death,
No,
This was simply the ambitions of a being trying to contact a soul,
Not lost but lost with comfort,
It decides to continue to grow the man’s comfort,
This man being me.
Swirling around him in a dance,
One creating a mood of happiness,
It fills the room, makes the feeling bountiful,
I take it in without rush and care,
I simply relax in this chair and watch the shadows swirl.
Created by the chaotic background of light,
I wish it could last for more than a simple night.
Why does night have to be the only ease the eyes receives,
I wish day was dark,
Dark like this dark.
A clarity through which there can be no secrets is contained.
A clarity which possess no wrongs and no wrongdoings,
Only a silhouette of beauty.
A light never present within this shadow.
The moon has a glow, but no light.
Light that burns the eyes,
And encourages loss of energy.
This dance causes only there to be no suion,
There is only a buoyancy and suspension,
I love this dark.
This dark is home to my writing,
This dark is the cause to my creativity.
This dark is why I lay awake in slumber.
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Old 07-19-2004, 07:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i never see you online anymore...guess your busy...

arent we all these days though...

anyhow..just wanted to know if you thought my verse sucked ass or something b/c you never hit me back about that stuff i sent u....its cool if u didnt like it..just wanted to see whats up with it..
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I enjoyed reading this peice, keep it up.
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Old 07-20-2004, 07:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 07-21-2004, 11:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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this shouldnt be slept on....

"There is only a buoyancy and suspension,
I love this dark.
This dark is home to my writing,
This dark is the cause to my creativity.
This dark is why I lay awake in slumber."

hmm its almost like what lies in your insecurities also is what gives you hope...
if isnt wasnt for the dark times in your life,you wouldnt be inspired for a change would you?
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Old 07-23-2004, 11:20 AM   #6 (permalink)
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this is a great piece man. Peeps are sleeping on this hard. WAKE UP!!!
There are too many lines I can quote from here. Good writing, nice flow and imagery.
Keep it up.
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Old 07-25-2004, 01:55 AM   #7 (permalink)
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wake up i cant believe i havent replied to this yet... well here i go... strap on your seat belt....!! lol

great piece man, lpoets right you dont come around here too often....and i enjoy when you do, because all the posts that ive read from you have been really good...

hope you find more time to write and good luck with all things

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Old 07-25-2004, 06:35 PM   #8 (permalink)
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this was pretty cool. no doubt brodie.

but some of your shit was a little contradictary.

keep droppin tho, stay up

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