Departure [FULL SONG...]

[Quotive]

Replied to; Lesbian Goddesses in Love - DaRk NeBuLa, Honour Negro - Blessence, Clogged Artery - SirVEER

Notes; I wrote this about my bestfriend. It was inspired by "Broken", and "Fade Away" by Seether, don't know if any of you listen to them, but yeah. Thats what the hooks about, pretty good songs, I'd suggest listening to them. But back to the point, this is more of a "flow" I know, but it still is extremely poetic. Its a bit abstract, like most of my work. Out of all the "love" poems I've posted, I cherish this one the MOST. I don't know if any of you will take the time to read the whole thing, but I'm still trying to record stuff, and if I ever hit the studio, this will definitely be one of the things I record. If you read this, and reply... I thank you so much. It'll mean a lot to me. Now, to the "poem".

+ Departure +

[ Chorus ]

my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you...
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /

[ Verse One ]

Its been a while since we've both departed -
so confused, / lonely, ashamed, / unfocused, in pain / and broken hearted -
I've always seen us as best friends -
its as if our love was destined -
our trust was pressed in -
this forgiven hope -
which is suspi ciously written in hidden notes -
I've witnessed a replinished growth -
in tension, and redemption that has risen against my oath -
the heart in my chest / has been ripped, and broke -
part of success / had me tricked, and hoaxed -
/ you, and I / are to people thats stressed -
we don't need a / new diguise / - this is us - we've each been depressed -
a - different love -, your beauty rises in the heart that beats in my chest -
I've reached for success -
but have only recieved the worst -
I can't succeed, it hurts -
to be / worthless /, I'm not / perfect, / whats my / purpose? / fuck this evil earth -
I'd.. rather reside with my loved ones, beneath the dirt -
Jesus, why are these broken pieces perked?
but girl, I'll / hold on /, and not drift away -
I know our love can / grow strong, / we'll see a different day -
for / so long / this sickness plauged -
now its time that I've tied my shoelaces,
lets try our new faces -
theres no longer a purpose for disguises -
"I'm still here,", the sunlight in your "Vertical Horizon" -
how are you not beautiful? thats apart of your / own beliefs, /
and it / only speaks / for your personal deprivement -
whats so special about / boney cheeks? / this pain / slowly creeps, /
but just keep searching for enlightment /

[ Chorus ]

my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you...
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /

[ Verse Two ]

your emotions aernt open, your scared to trust, -
but I'm / there for you, / because I / care for you /
and whenever you're happy, they both choke it, and tear it up -
both of your parents suck -
but their not "Broken", compared to us -
We're blinded by the mist that floats in the air, with dust -
what happened to the gloss that used to exist, -
upon your beautiful lips? -
I suppose it it dissolved along with your immortal past -
the / pain manifests, / and exists with your morbid acts -
your / decayed and damaged chest / is the place where breathing is a foreign task /
I haven't / given up / on / dripping blood /, but I've poured my last -
I used to ignore usual comments -
now everytime / grace is mentioned / I / pay attention, / I notice our friendships beautiful promise -
fluently problems - began to ruin our contents -
but I'm trying to make love the resolution to conflicts -
you, and I are angels, the only thing we have to fear is the devil -
your imperial, everything about your apperance is special -
though its more than physical, we've connected on a more spiritual level -
I began to edit schemes - in my pleasant dreams -
because we are / exact players / on seperate teams -
broken smiles lie in / stacked layers / this is the second scene -
you used to be my rose, but your pricks are pointless -
the lovey dovey is ugly, and I'm not mad... just somewhat dissapointed -

[ Chorus ]

my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you...
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /

[ Verse Three ]

lets rewind the moment -
to find emotions -
your / damaged wings / can be replinished -
with / jagged things, / or a strand of thread -
this dimension is given the description as demented,
but your an angel, let my hands caress -
your gorgeous skin -
I document my emotions for you / constantly, /
/ probably / because I want to become more than friends -
you help me ignore my morbid sins -
like the confession section of church -
my heart contains pain, but thoughts of you help lessen the hurt -
your presence is worth -
a present from Heaven, your essence is so precious to earth -
as trillions of seconds disperse -
into a million days -
I insist to make you happy, but your repent to conceal your faith -
am I still replaced? because I feel erased -
I've been confused, in this brilliant phase -
of mistaking lust, for love -
just because -
being in lust is an action -
but being in love... is a passion, -
and my pupils are transfixed -
on your body, and all of your beautiful assets -
I hope you realize the truth in my last breaths -
My heart was bruised, in a crash test -
remember you, and I could have worn the entity of "true" -
now I'm just going to have to ignore my memories of you -

[ Chorus ]

my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you... I'll miss you...
now we have to / "fade away" / with the "broken elements" /
my / favorite day / was when we / spoke intelligent /

[Mind~$oul]

This was a really nice piece man. Very heartfelt. It started off real strong in the beginning, but kinda slipped on the 2nd verse. But you did end it off strong to me. Whenever you get the chance to record it. Post the audio in the intercourse for us.

one luv

[Quotive]

Thanks for the props man, appreciate it a lot. And the second verse is my favorite out of them all, weird eh... lol... Good looks man!

I'm not selfish, but I'm uppin this!