Monopoly Gone

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Old 07-02-2004, 10:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Monopoly Gone
my last poem, beautiful nobody, lost souls




Monopoly Gone


pain as tender
love as counterfeit
as bloody as money
in vessels of credit

debit of cards
heaven of stars

both I search for guidance
both I... search for
like any
Earth whore
worth more
than the little green paper slip
trusting in God
for us
each time it slips from our hands

like falling cliff's climbers
like all riffs and rhymers

smooth
like curdled milk
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Old 07-03-2004, 09:51 AM   #2 (permalink)
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this was tight u stayed on da subject and all tight work ......peace
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Old 07-03-2004, 03:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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pain as tender
love as counterfeit
as bloody as money
in vessels of credit

debit of cards
heaven of stars

Thats tight right there. Abstract, of course. Thats your style...

"both I search for guidance
both I... search for
like any
Earth whore
worth more
than the little green paper slip"

Liked the multies man.. lol. Made it stick together. Ain't seen you here in a while... cool ish, keep writing man.
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Old 07-04-2004, 08:17 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Damn, what's good former DOG member : )

This was smooth as ever, the link to money was kept throughout.. you know im feeling this


pain as tender
love as counterfeit
as bloody as money
in vessels of credit

^i like this part especially, keep dropping and stay active

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Old 07-04-2004, 12:08 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Wow...very nice piece!! Great job!

I loved your technique!
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Old 07-04-2004, 03:04 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Yo man, I almost bounced up outta here without peepin this piece...but yea...

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Old 07-04-2004, 03:09 PM   #7 (permalink)
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love it or hate it C.ash R. ules E. Verything A. round M. e...... money rules the world, this was a nice piece and I was loving how the overall theme was expressed out


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Old 07-04-2004, 03:27 PM   #8 (permalink)
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This was different frm anythin i seen on this board, i really enjoyed it, well done, good piece...*
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Old 07-05-2004, 05:26 PM   #9 (permalink)
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great piece man. Nice concept

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i love this, the abstracness made the piece very unique, very creative with the style and the idea man, stay up
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Old 07-06-2004, 09:01 PM   #11 (permalink)
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thanks for checking this out peeps. it's appreciated. thanks.

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