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Old 07-02-2004, 02:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Congratulations marriage...

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"you" Quotive
Love me, doubt me, leave me, miss me--My life InTheStars

this piece came more out of necessity than anything. this is about a couple i have known for awhile now and they are finally getting married........... I guess the main reason i wrote this is because this is what ive always wanted out of my own relationships, but like clarksvegas dan and many other men in the world, we never seem to strike the nail on the head right!!. Hopefully someday this will be me and someone else............... to be continued!!

Marriage [heart]
Your hands have joined together
Unity of two souls that were destined,
Bound by daily steps bringing you
Closer each day since the light of birth.
Your lives are now one forever
Beginning a journey that will challenge
The definition of happiness, exceeding
Its pleasures and all its treasures of worth.

Your lives have been made complete
By the half who can find your smile
In a cloud of constant confusion that a
Day's struggles has been known to bring.

Your future is two with one heartbeat
Handling a horizon of sometimes turmoil
With the calmness you both possess
Remembering the eternal promise by the vowed ring.

Your days ahead are filled with mystery and magic
Moments of beautiful bliss and untimely tears,
But countless memories making tomorrow brighter still
Like your love that will grow stronger through the years.

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Old 07-02-2004, 03:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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real nice dedication to marriage, it was to the point and also carrying some mystique.

Your days ahead are filled with mystery and magic
Moments of beautiful bliss and untimely tears,
But countless memories making tomorrow brighter still
Like your love that will grow stronger through the years.

I liked this part a lot

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Old 07-02-2004, 04:54 PM   #3 (permalink)
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allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!allnakey will do you doggie style!
I'm glad that you can still think positivly about marriage after having trouble in that field yourself. It's always good to think positively. Nice piece like Brit said it was a nice little dedication so to say.


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Old 07-02-2004, 08:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks for the replies

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allnakey your opinon goes even farther

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Old 07-03-2004, 12:00 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Dude name the poems too. And stop uppin old post.
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yo this was a crazy tight poem am feelin this joint tight work........peace
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i agree with the idea of marriage is not just a reason for benefits or to get it on, but a reason for two souls to live a life of one...and most people have a hard time of giving away their indepence or should i say your own life for something that is dependant of someone else...and that mindset can create an un healthy relationship...but yeah, i like the topic...makes you think and you're positive ideals are agreeable
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glad you liked

ill fix my piece mind$oul, my bad.........
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