((Missing you/ Addiction))

Ghost Native · 07-02-2004, 04:15 AM

I replied to these well more den these

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...20#post9344120
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...03#post9344803

Dear sicknes, I am missing you
Because I some How took a wrong turn
For now I am once agin addicted
And your Passion I yurn..
I know I wear a Silly grin
To cover up the boiling pain I feel inside
With thoughts of you filling my head; but then agin
To love you is like suicide meeting the sweetest sin
Making me feel Like I need your tainted essence more
Wich wears down my fragile patience
Like you are now apart of me, the death sentence I adore...
The needle that peireces my flesh and enters the veins under my skin
Then Sends me into an inebriated trance
And leaves me lifeless, like a battle against my self that I cant win
But I know the only good to come for dealing with you
Will have me coughing up blood and foam in the back of an ambulance
You have truly been there for me through my heart aches
And Uncontrolled shakes
Ide hate to leave you here
When for so long Iv'e held you so dear
But now My faithful friend heroin we must part...

Brit Boi Gee · 07-02-2004, 12:06 PM

This was like writing in the heat of addiction, and the feelings were so close to being great, clean feelings. I think you managed to take addiction into something soothing and bring it out as almost blinding one side of you.

Emjoyable read

Ghost Native · 07-02-2004, 10:12 PM

AY Thanks Folk thas my first poem

UPPIN

Quotive · 07-03-2004, 04:02 PM

"To love you is like suicide meeting the sweetest sin"

This line was tight, caught my attention. Hm.. loved it!

Oh shyt, it was about heroine. Damn, yo... that poem is fire. Your first? Shyt, I wish my first poem was as good as that. Love your word choice man, you've got talent. Keep postin', and since PEOPLE SLEPT ON THIS PIECE, I'll reply to whatever you post.

Stay up.

Ghost Native · 07-04-2004, 03:45 AM

^^^ Thanks YUN I appreciate THAT

kyza soza · 07-04-2004, 08:04 AM

errrrrrrrrr lol...

Dear sicknes, I am missing you
Because I some How took a wrong turn
For now I am once agin addicted
And your Passion I yurn..
I know I wear a Silly grin
To cover up the boiling pain I feel inside
With thoughts of you filling my head; but then agin
To love you is like suicide meeting the sweetest sin
Making me feel Like I need your tainted essence more
Wich wears down my fragile patience
Like you are now apart of me, the death sentence I adore...
The needle that peireces my flesh and enters the veins under my skin
Then Sends me into an inebriated trance
And leaves me lifeless, like a battle against my self that I cant win
But I know the only good to come for dealing with you
Will have me coughing up blood and foam in the back of an ambulance
You have truly been there for me through my heart aches
And Uncontrolled shakes
Ide hate to leave you here
When for so long Iv'e held you so dear
But now My faithful friend heroin we must part...

...i loved all of this, that sin line was fire... fuckin great poem, let alone your first, real nice drop

Welcome to the realm

Stay up and active

1

Can ya holla at my collabo with sparkle plz. Thanks.

emi2real · 07-04-2004, 08:18 AM

dats a very strong one.dont let ur in dry keep flowin

emi2real · 07-04-2004, 08:21 AM

Yeah Keep Flowin 4 Real

Xero Satsujin · 07-04-2004, 03:39 PM

was diggin this, cause I work with a few cracked out kids...their mothers were addicts and it passed through the blood streem...good shit you got here...keep it up...brit boi said it best though, so listen to his reply...by the way, welcome to the realm...stay a while...

Mind~$oul · 07-05-2004, 05:55 PM

Pretty good piece. I can relate to this, because I once was a drug addicted for a few years. It's a terrible thing. Welcome to the realm.

One luv

07-02-2004, 04:15 AM	#1 (permalink)
Ghost Native ™°¤Made Man Mercenary¤°™ Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Down Sizzouth, JAwja Posts: 37	((Missing you/ Addiction)) I replied to these well more den these http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...20#post9344120 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...03#post9344803 Dear sicknes, I am missing you Because I some How took a wrong turn For now I am once agin addicted And your Passion I yurn.. I know I wear a Silly grin To cover up the boiling pain I feel inside With thoughts of you filling my head; but then agin To love you is like suicide meeting the sweetest sin Making me feel Like I need your tainted essence more Wich wears down my fragile patience Like you are now apart of me, the death sentence I adore... The needle that peireces my flesh and enters the veins under my skin Then Sends me into an inebriated trance And leaves me lifeless, like a battle against my self that I cant win But I know the only good to come for dealing with you Will have me coughing up blood and foam in the back of an ambulance You have truly been there for me through my heart aches And Uncontrolled shakes Ide hate to leave you here When for so long Iv'e held you so dear But now My faithful friend heroin we must part... __________________ *All My problems are solved with this....* FUCK YOU

07-02-2004, 12:06 PM	#2 (permalink)
Brit Boi Gee manifest the zen Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Near To Athena Posts: 15,826	This was like writing in the heat of addiction, and the feelings were so close to being great, clean feelings. I think you managed to take addiction into something soothing and bring it out as almost blinding one side of you. Emjoyable read __________________ Those friends thou hast, and their adoption tried, Grapple them to thy soul with hoops of steel. -William Shakespeare Brit Boi has a highly calibrated wifermometer

07-02-2004, 10:12 PM	#3 (permalink)
Ghost Native ™°¤Made Man Mercenary¤°™ Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Down Sizzouth, JAwja Posts: 37	AY Thanks Folk thas my first poem UPPIN __________________ *All My problems are solved with this....* FUCK YOU

07-04-2004, 03:45 AM	#5 (permalink)
Ghost Native ™°¤Made Man Mercenary¤°™ Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Down Sizzouth, JAwja Posts: 37	^^^ Thanks YUN I appreciate THAT __________________ *All My problems are solved with this....* FUCK YOU

07-04-2004, 03:39 PM	#9 (permalink)
Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Sinking into the paper, like I was ink Posts: 2,196	was diggin this, cause I work with a few cracked out kids...their mothers were addicts and it passed through the blood streem...good shit you got here...keep it up...brit boi said it best though, so listen to his reply...by the way, welcome to the realm...stay a while... __________________ !.¸(`!.¸Xero Satsujin¸.!`)¸.! "Laissez les bon temps rouler" "Time to a writer is like play dough in the hands of a toddler..."

07-04-2004, 08:04 AM	#6 (permalink)
kyza soza This way up. Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 16,568	errrrrrrrrr lol... Dear sicknes, I am missing you Because I some How took a wrong turn For now I am once agin addicted And your Passion I yurn.. I know I wear a Silly grin To cover up the boiling pain I feel inside With thoughts of you filling my head; but then agin To love you is like suicide meeting the sweetest sin Making me feel Like I need your tainted essence more Wich wears down my fragile patience Like you are now apart of me, the death sentence I adore... The needle that peireces my flesh and enters the veins under my skin Then Sends me into an inebriated trance And leaves me lifeless, like a battle against my self that I cant win But I know the only good to come for dealing with you Will have me coughing up blood and foam in the back of an ambulance You have truly been there for me through my heart aches And Uncontrolled shakes Ide hate to leave you here When for so long Iv'e held you so dear But now My faithful friend heroin we must part... ...i loved all of this, that sin line was fire... fuckin great poem, let alone your first, real nice drop Welcome to the realm Stay up and active 1 Can ya holla at my collabo with sparkle plz. Thanks.

07-04-2004, 08:18 AM	#7 (permalink)
emi2real Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 25	dats a very strong one.dont let ur in dry keep flowin

07-04-2004, 08:21 AM	#8 (permalink)
emi2real Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 25	Yeah Keep Flowin 4 Real

07-05-2004, 05:55 PM	#10 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	Pretty good piece. I can relate to this, because I once was a drug addicted for a few years. It's a terrible thing. Welcome to the realm. One luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

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