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Old 07-01-2004, 05:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Lovers Scripture

replies, My Life by IntheStars, In my Dream, Love standing & 4 years.

So you've worked to ease my fear
And I certainly want you near
But you are not as you appear
So I cannot keep you dear
I think perhaps that your fear
is more damaging to this union
Trust in me; confide
or simply let it ride
how can I abide this tide
I've got too much pride inside
Emotional Bonds get fried
cause you tried to play this like a game
Printing out my name
Sending me down lost lovers lane
I can't go back the way I came
As for getting closer, I must refrain
my well of love you divide with lies
then subtract it with your spies
This isn't the art of war
This is the art of love
And from Above
I feel you've violated
the knife in my chest is also serrated
I will remove it and I will heal
with or without you
It's your hand to deal
But to cheat your partner
Isn't keeping it real
So I am Angry
As base as that may be
At first you did,
but now you don't,
Make me feel happy
Now, I'm feeling crappy
ready to leave for any other girl
who doesn't have to want my love that's sappy
And I'm sure I'll cry a little bit
And Drink until
I puke and spit
to reject the poisons
you put me through
Yeah, I think I know you.
Better than Before
the one who could deceive
the one that you adore
I'm not running to your door
Why would I want more
I see no reason why
I should today of any day
Walk Blind into a lie
I'm not claiming to know
your ulterior motive
But I can sense it's there
So I will not be devoted
until the truth is clear and present
And those who plotted and thought it would work
finally realize that it doesn't
Until there are amends
or at least an apology
There can be no deeper
committment
for the likes of you and me
And Tell Tarot
that they don't know
How this love should go
And if your love is true
then let the truth
show through
That's the only thing to do
to let me know it's you
Because there can be no secrets
Between true star-cursed lovers
Deceit Don't fade
it lurks and it hovers
like a predator stalking
it's suspecting prey
if you trust me
then I'll trust you
But if I get the sense
that the deceit intends to continue
I will not hesitate to
say that we are through
And I cannot fake a thing like this
I have to live by truth
I cannot live like you.

Ilove you & I miss U.
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Old 07-01-2004, 06:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nicely expressed share the same views on this. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 07-01-2004, 07:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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replies, My Life by IntheStars, In my Dream, Love standing & 4 years.

So you've worked to ease my fear
And I certainly want you near
But you are not as you appear
So I cannot keep you dear
I think perhaps that your fear
is more damaging to this union
Trust in me; confide
or simply let it ride
how can I abide this tide
I've got too much pride inside
Emotional Bonds get fried
cause you tried to play this like a game
Printing out my name
Sending me down lost lovers lane
I can't go back the way I came
As for getting closer, I must refrain
my well of love you divide with lies
then subtract it with your spies
This isn't the art of war
This is the art of love
And from Above
I feel you've violated
the knife in my chest is also serrated
I will remove it and I will heal
with or without you
It's your hand to deal
But to cheat your partner
Isn't keeping it real
So I am Angry
As base as that may be
At first you did,
but now you don't,
Make me feel happy
Now, I'm feeling crappy
ready to leave for any other girl
who doesn't have to want my love that's sappy
And I'm sure I'll cry a little bit
And Drink until
I puke and spit
to reject the poisons
you put me through
Yeah, I think I know you.
Better than Before
the one who could deceive
the one that you adore
I'm not running to your door
Why would I want more
I see no reason why
I should today of any day
Walk Blind into a lie
I'm not claiming to know
your ulterior motive
But I can sense it's there
So I will not be devoted
until the truth is clear and present
And those who plotted and thought it would work
finally realize that it doesn't
Until there are amends
or at least an apology
There can be no deeper
committment
for the likes of you and me
And Tell Tarot
that they don't know
How this love should go
And if your love is true
then let the truth
show through
That's the only thing to do
to let me know it's you
Because there can be no secrets
Between true star-cursed lovers
Deceit Don't fade
it lurks and it hovers
like a predator stalking
it's suspecting prey
if you trust me
then I'll trust you
But if I get the sense
that the deceit intends to continue
I will not hesitate to
say that we are through
And I cannot fake a thing like this
I have to live by truth
I cannot live like you.

Ilove you & I miss U.


I loved the poem.. I am happy that you can show true emotion through each line. I want you to know that if maybe if you feel deep down my feelings are lies...then ir I was you I would go. But you now know what I am probably going to do. I can go on with or without as well. I just hope that someday something more could come of this, something more is all I really want. But I know the circumstances and I know things are not always apparent or crystal clear, but you confuse the hell out of me. But it seems as though you pretty much have me figured out. I miss you and I love you. Talk to you later.
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Old 07-02-2004, 04:05 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Real nice poem I liked the strong passioned you expressed toawrd your audience

excellent peice

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Old 07-03-2004, 02:31 AM   #5 (permalink)
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You came strong with this. Really feeling this.

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Old 07-03-2004, 09:47 AM   #6 (permalink)
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yo am feelin this joint this was deep and strong
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Old 07-03-2004, 12:53 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Walk Blind into a lie
I'm not claiming to know
your ulterior motive
But I can sense it's there
So I will not be devoted

right there is the shit man

yo hit me up on private messenger dawg, we could do a really good collabo

that is if youre up to it!!!

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Old 07-06-2004, 01:56 PM   #8 (permalink)
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So you've worked to ease my fear
And I certainly want you near
But you are not as you appear
So I cannot keep you dear

the very last line kind of sounded to me as a filler type line..... something out of more necessity to rhyme than just flowing.... if ya know what i mean, just my opinion clarksville dan, peace
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Old 07-06-2004, 02:31 PM   #9 (permalink)
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yeah man, you didn't ease up at all...this was a very strong leveled piece that kept on pushing...good...
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Old 07-06-2004, 02:58 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Sending me down lost lovers lane

This line was really cool i thought, quite thought provoking.

This whole poem was short, but pretty nice girl.. i like the simple rhyming because it gets your point across very well..

Good looking out on this one, 1

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