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Old 07-01-2004, 03:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Written with grace, and concentual feelings. Consumed in a place where feelings do not mean much to one, but so much to many others. I dedicate this to you.

you, and I share common traits.
Its your presence that helps assist me to concentrate.
The light fades... and dissapears the less that you see it.
The fact that, I've liked you for the past ten months has been kept as a secret.
My heart has been leveled to pieces, because your so special to me, its...
just that we have the same personalities, identical musical tastes.
you don't know what I'd do to erase,
your stress, just so you could realize that you have a beautiful face.
I couldn't take the risk,
to ruin what we've established as friends, and take a chance at a relationship.
It was difficult remaining patient with,
your decisions. You may think that this is absurd,
but any bliss that I've written, was based on you, you exist in my words.
You may think that this is crazy, or dumb,
but I'm right there with you, 3 Doors Down, Away From The Sun.

I don't want to miss a thing,
I just want to hold you close.
Don't miss a thing, I hope that your eyes are open.
Try to focus, on my emotions.
Being involved in stress must be the latest trend.
you were the only one there for me, when I was surrounded by the fakest friends.

"you make me feel as lucky as I can be."

Love is a complicated game, I wish we were two different users.
I also wish you'd realize that I love you,
sometime in the distant future.


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I know some of you listen to rock, so you should catch a few things, for those who don't, ehh, hope you like it. Stay up y'all. One.
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Old 07-02-2004, 02:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Like the feel to this piece. I've seen better from you though. I see lately you been posting a few mushy joints. I seen the young one if fallin in love awwwwwwwwwwww

"you exist in my words"

^Really liked that line. Keep it up

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Old 07-02-2004, 03:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Ghost Native takes it up the butt!
I liked it a lil to mushy to me rii now

Geuss Im in a bad mood LOL, still a Good peaice though

I liek this part (quote)but I'm right there with you, 3 Doors Down, Away From The Sun.(quoute)

ay keep written folk......
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Old 07-02-2004, 02:22 PM   #4 (permalink)
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tooshort21 takes it up the butt!
good shit dawg really enjoyed this read

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