Love me, doubt me, leave me, miss me--My life

InTheStars · 07-01-2004, 09:55 AM

Replied to
the straight part of a circle
love standing & four years
beige

You think I didn’t notice
It’s funny how you see things sometimes
that maybe, just maybe someone didn’t want you to see
You doubt every little part of
every little word I say
Hell I even see you doubt yourself,
If you really love me
or really know me
or really want this
That is fine
to live with doubt
I just ask one little favor
don’t fake it
Don’t feel I forced anything from this
You are always welcomed to go as you please
Yeah
there have been others
that feel how you feel
that doubt the things you doubt
and if you didn’t notice
I made them forget me
Well I forgot them
It is easier that way
to be the one rejecting
rather the one rejected
If anyone who has been with me
thinks they get lost InTheStars with me
then maybe they should ride on something a little stronger than hope
pondered in dreams
Maybe they should realize,
yeah...nothing lasts forever
risks should be taken
life is not always a given
but don’t think chance meetings are mistaken
courses of action in ones life
meant for another and not for you
Or think that I am a passerby
with all or nothing to lose
I will teach you what you want to be taught
and learn from you what I choose
Don’t mistake me for what I am not
I will never hide that part of the truth
I am bitchy
deceitful
sweet
and kind
lovable
cunning
and in some cases wise
demanding
and aggravating
and yes I can lie
hypocritical
with welcoming eyes
But those traits and others
shouldn’t make you doubt
everything is a risk
I thought that was what life
was all about.

Quotive · 07-01-2004, 03:48 PM

Damn..

"I made them forget me
Well I forgot them
It is easier that way
to be the one rejecting
rather the one rejected"

That was tight. I was so lost in the beginning lol, but yo.. this was really nice. Loved it.

Clarksvegas_Dan · 07-01-2004, 04:46 PM

This was cool. But I'm sure it could have been longer.lol Things I'll take to heart.

Sun_Flower · 07-01-2004, 07:03 PM

Expressed very well straight to the point i love'd it. I enjoy'd reading this piece. Thanks for sharing.

Mind~$oul · 07-02-2004, 02:47 AM

Damn, damn, damn. That was fire. Nothing more I can say.

one luv

tooshort21 · 07-02-2004, 01:58 PM

and if you didn’t notice
I made them forget me
Well I forgot them
It is easier that way
to be the one rejecting
rather the one rejected

yeah............ i guess good writing........

i made them forget me....

you didnt do a good job with me, i still remember......

InTheStars · 07-04-2004, 01:19 PM

uppin--Thanks to everyone for their replies...
MUCH LUV

allnakey · 07-04-2004, 03:02 PM

And you just let your emotions bare, with out the fear of judgement, It's like a endless thought going on and reading this piece. The emotion was crazy and this was just like a "this is me piece", "this is what Im about," sems very honest. This was a very nice piece

Stay Up, Much Love, Peace

kyza soza · 07-04-2004, 03:06 PM

Good expressing your soul here, i liked it.. real honest, as someone said.. smooth flow, feeling it

Stay up, 1

07-01-2004, 09:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
InTheStars IWLH4Y2C Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Saint Petersburg, FL Posts: 434	Love me, doubt me, leave me, miss me--My life Replied to the straight part of a circle love standing & four years beige You think I didn’t notice It’s funny how you see things sometimes that maybe, just maybe someone didn’t want you to see You doubt every little part of every little word I say Hell I even see you doubt yourself, If you really love me or really know me or really want this That is fine to live with doubt I just ask one little favor don’t fake it Don’t feel I forced anything from this You are always welcomed to go as you please Yeah there have been others that feel how you feel that doubt the things you doubt and if you didn’t notice I made them forget me Well I forgot them It is easier that way to be the one rejecting rather the one rejected If anyone who has been with me thinks they get lost InTheStars with me then maybe they should ride on something a little stronger than hope pondered in dreams Maybe they should realize, yeah...nothing lasts forever risks should be taken life is not always a given but don’t think chance meetings are mistaken courses of action in ones life meant for another and not for you Or think that I am a passerby with all or nothing to lose I will teach you what you want to be taught and learn from you what I choose Don’t mistake me for what I am not I will never hide that part of the truth I am bitchy deceitful sweet and kind lovable cunning and in some cases wise demanding and aggravating and yes I can lie hypocritical with welcoming eyes But those traits and others shouldn’t make you doubt everything is a risk I thought that was what life was all about. __________________ In the reality of many realities, how we see what we see, affects the quality of our reality- John Trudell Last edited by InTheStars; 07-01-2004 at 10:03 AM. Reason: change title and wording

07-01-2004, 04:46 PM	#3 (permalink)
Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Clarksvegas Posts: 142	This was cool. But I'm sure it could have been longer.lol Things I'll take to heart. __________________ Mustard seed.

07-01-2004, 07:03 PM	#4 (permalink)
Sun_Flower Bluez By Loves Eye Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 640	Expressed very well straight to the point i love'd it. I enjoy'd reading this piece. Thanks for sharing. __________________ The intimate rhythms of life... Moonlit in my eyes Illuminate this mystic divine Blinding sights that taunt’s for life

07-02-2004, 02:47 AM	#5 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	Damn, damn, damn. That was fire. Nothing more I can say. one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

07-02-2004, 01:58 PM	#6 (permalink)
tooshort21 Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: SIOUX Posts: 1,281	and if you didn’t notice I made them forget me Well I forgot them It is easier that way to be the one rejecting rather the one rejected yeah............ i guess good writing........ i made them forget me.... you didnt do a good job with me, i still remember...... __________________ will write poetry for food.

07-04-2004, 01:19 PM	#7 (permalink)
InTheStars IWLH4Y2C Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Saint Petersburg, FL Posts: 434	uppin--Thanks to everyone for their replies... MUCH LUV __________________ In the reality of many realities, how we see what we see, affects the quality of our reality- John Trudell

07-04-2004, 03:02 PM	#8 (permalink)
allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 2,860	And you just let your emotions bare, with out the fear of judgement, It's like a endless thought going on and reading this piece. The emotion was crazy and this was just like a "this is me piece", "this is what Im about," sems very honest. This was a very nice piece Stay Up, Much Love, Peace __________________ And I sat watching a flower As it was withering I was embarrassed by its honesty So I'd prefer to be remembered as a smiling face Not this fucking wreck That's taken its place get some balls biatch or else

07-04-2004, 03:06 PM	#9 (permalink)
kyza soza This way up. Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 16,570	Good expressing your soul here, i liked it.. real honest, as someone said.. smooth flow, feeling it Stay up, 1

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