love standing & Four years

[Sun_Flower]

What does love stand for?
When heart beats in music
Gone still

No love
No love in mind
No love in eyes
Shut…

All that plays smile
In pleasure it up rise
Leaving a state that boils
Never the less unfolds clove

Like a dove ascending
To its home

What does love stand for?

In two hearts that moans more
More of me being you
That is light without dark
Kisses that last forever
Motionless…

It runs
It flows
Between us
Its emotion

No love
No love between us

Just the still music
That plays our hearts
To motion
Is that love standing?

In its place not seen but known
Slightest touch and it’s a vision
Seen by others cry
Tears its called
In love standing

Four Years

It’s been over and its starting to show
How shallow you are
Why now?
I have fallen, drown, dragged, and left to decay
What now I ask myself for you
Do I regain the strength in loving you?
Four years in abstinence
Of denying you in heart and mind
Lingering the possibility of you near
Pondering a stream of what ifs
Longing to hold you in care
Now it seems astray to days
Days gone into yesterday
Leaving today for tomorrow
Despising your love was golden
When now I’ve counted you out of my life
The nights began to glimmer in peace of mind
Showing the moon once again
Naked to the eye
A kiss I said goodbye
Four years and now you reside
A mere call of the sort
You wanting me and me not knowing you
Memories that once live dies in eyes flamed
Just another pleasure to put on hold
My heart you played a fool
To say you could not handle a woman’s love
How was I to face a man that’s blind?
Blinded with his own confusion
To fight and be at war watch the news
It must have been hell not knowing your own heart
Feelings that kept beating on
Not knowing if you still love
Now you play the fool
To say you’re sorry in four years
My love I won’t regain
In strength of telling you
I still love you

Replies to Drink of liquid fire, Lost Souls, Zzzzz's, Poem Nevermore, Take a closer look... etc.. Rules have changed wow

[emi2real]

n**** u r grown,quit ritin da luv shit

[InTheStars]

if you don't want to have your post closed by a MOD I would post your replies....

[Clarksvegas_Dan]

This is soooo sad. I really don't know if there is a right thing to say. So I'll just say great poem, and I hope it gets better.

[Sun_Flower]

emi2real thanks for your opinion I haven't wrote any new piece lately, I had this a long time thought I would share if its not to your par then you don't have to reply no problem.

InThaStars Thanks for the heads up if its closed its closed Just wanted to share this piece haven't been here in a good while.

Clarksvegas_Dan good enough I guess yes sad thats that thanks.

[Mind~$oul]

Originally Posted by emi2real

n**** u r grown,quit ritin da luv shit

Shut that shit up.


Anyway, Sun Flower long time no see. I was just telling somebody about your work here in the realm. Good to see you back.


"In two hearts that moans more
More of me being you
That is light without dark
Kisses that last forever
Motionless…"

Really feeling that part there. It was set up nicely.

"My heart you played a fool
To say you could not handle a woman’s love
How was I to face a man that’s blind?
Blinded with his own confusion"

That stood out the most to me in the second piece. Those last two lines really made me think of myself and a current relationship I was in. Always a pleasure reading your work.


one luv

"

[6ftground]

THis was a nice piece I liked it so much I free styled off it... Keep posting fam..Peace



communication is trust baby
Conversation is trusted lend me your ear baby
I speak out of lust not cause I care for you
The truth hurts like a Mel Gibson’s movie

I don’t care who spits the good game
It’s must to trust you in this dirty game
I’ll hit you with Notes at A# on the piano
I got you hitting notes like Maria on the down low
And I didn’t even have to go…

(DOW~~N low DOWN LOW DOWN LOW
DOW~~N low)
Now baby back to my free flow
I can skeet slow or I can beat it up like a pro
Slam-dunk in like the truth
You can Down it
to the head girl like you sip “N” Blue
or you can indulge in CUMC
I want you with me

I smooth like the blue notes
You smoke?
Then we can go toke
If you don’t
Then you can catch my second hand choke

I ain’t no joke baby
You can rub my bush while I touch yours
We can run the streets in my sports car
Ride all night until we reach the North Star
Or we can hit a sports bar
Watch a reds game instead of you yelling
Out Casey’s

You’ll be yelling out Stacey’s
Yelling out CUMC
touch me baby, touch my Stacey
Come on baby…
let it burn baby
if not lady, You lose your turn baby

[Sun_Flower]

Mind $oul Thanks for the love yes its been awhile, haven't been writting but trying to start again the spark isn't there for some reason I have to urge to spit out anything profound but i guess in time right. Thanks again 4 da love! Appreciate it!

6ftground i liked the piece you dropped it was silly and different made me smile. I quote your part "if not a lady you lose your turn baby". Very original i like that! glad you like the piece though. tha love is appreciated.

[tooshort21]

good piece here sun flower

i dont really know what to say exactly so ill just say good luck with the whole ordeal and may god bless you..... peace

[lpoet]

beautiful

ncie to see u here again..its been awhile

Kisses that last forever
...for some reason that line stuck with me after the poem..kinda rings in my head

very nice

wish u would post more

[kyza soza]

In its place not seen but known
Slightest touch and it’s a vision
Seen by others cry
Tears its called
In love standing

That is really really powerful i think, and says alot about the piece.. i like that part.

To say you could not handle a woman’s love
How was I to face a man that’s blind?
Blinded with his own confusion
To fight and be at war watch the news
It must have been hell not knowing your own heart
Feelings that kept beating on
Not knowing if you still love
Now you play the fool
To say you’re sorry in four years
My love I won’t regain
In strength of telling you
I still love you

Now this.. this is something else.. i love this part

This whole poem was deep.. digign it...

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[Sun_Flower]

[b]Tooshort21 Thanks for reading glad you liked.

Ipoet Yes I know its been a good while, I'm trying to start writting again, taking time though but I'll try and post a lil bit more. Thanks again for taking the time to read one love.

Kyza Soza Thanks for the love its appreciated glad you enjoy'd the piece. Thanks!