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Old 06-30-2004, 05:03 AM   #1 (permalink)
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i know f'd up
i fucked up cus i was scared of fallin in love/
now am lonely missin my one and only one/
i know wut i did was wrong/
and wut we had was strong/
but ma i wasn't ready for all of that/
but now i am and want to go back/
in time so i can get u back/
cus back then i was scared of settleling down/
so i pushed u back and i regret it now/
now the jokes on me so i feel like a clown/
down on the floor like the ground/
mad and sad cus my love i found and lost/
u was the only chick that i cared about and trust/
and i was the one and only ni**a u loved and lust/
now am lost and lonely like a school bus in da summer time/
nothin can fix my mistake not even the am so sorry line/
if u wanna continued ya life without me then am gon let it be/
but if ur lonely and need someone then remember me/
peace/


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Old 06-30-2004, 02:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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didnt this post get closed previously........
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Old 06-30-2004, 03:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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reply to another poem...its 3 not 2
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Old 06-30-2004, 03:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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well i liked this, it was simple, but i guess its how you felt, and yea it was short and sweet, you stuck to a basic structure, anywayz, good lookin...*
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Old 06-30-2004, 05:08 PM   #5 (permalink)
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it was kinda of a rap style poem, nice work tho
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Old 07-02-2004, 02:18 AM   #6 (permalink)
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aight yall thanks uppin for more replies
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Old 07-06-2004, 04:37 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 07-06-2004, 03:07 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I thought it was a cool drop, you got your feelings across.. which is all that matters at the end of the day..

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Old 07-09-2004, 11:35 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Not a bad piece.. nice drop.
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reply to another poem...its 3 not 2

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