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Old 06-29-2004, 08:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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confusion.. you.. race..
nations..


tired, as a people entirely sick of these pretenders
we're fucked over by caucasian's political agenda
who's middle finger mentality is pitifully improvising
i'm opposing your mp's and their liberal sympathisers
overused platitudes, showing emotions as see through
merely empty words to me- a product of social upheaval
look in the eyes of evil, he's probably anglo-saxon
restricting masses, since his monopoly angle's taxing
stifling blacks, i'm attacking corrupt babylonians
soon to burn as a catalyst for fire like petroleum
know i'm embodying a marcus garvey.. malcolm, martin
plotting a path into slums and the countless starving
imparting knowledge of self, an extension of salary
simply put if we're sharing a skin, then we're family
not only laurels, my children are resting on anything
who's thinking is akin to the depths of my melanin

nubian.. i..
africa.. life..


i'm authoring black thoughts that i'm often caught in
my message- unrelenting till i'm forced to the coffin..
there're rules to this! ..you're not over colonialism
'cause my people are suffering a cultural plagiarism
within oversized clothes, unaware of a single code
blacks perceiving you represent a new age minstrel show
patronised heritage, you weren't born into enslavement
but'll demise black skin deep, in the form of cremation
'stead of clinging to public opinion and mass digression
of how the holocausts' invalidating all black oppression
the notion's ill advised, stupid.. and almost like you could
draw parallels between the gay & civil rights movements
..•••s were slain but, i'm past care in this instance
my focus is negroes, tarred feathered and lynched dead!
only to live in death.. 400 year patience, ain't here
united nation world-unity a myth, like ancient pangea

origin..
nothing.. infinite.. allah..
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huh, good shit haas


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Old 06-30-2004, 09:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 06-30-2004, 09:55 AM   #4 (permalink)
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h.wood - stop me
eloquent poet - a scent from a rose
subconcious - infeasible comprehension
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Old 06-30-2004, 07:30 PM   #5 (permalink)
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hmm i liked it was very strong
but sometimes you just gotta hold nothin back and let it all out and not sugar code anything about it
its not a secret that minorities are looked at very harshly by some of the "Important" people of our society
but some of us would love to see racial equality become a reality as far fetched as that sounds...
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Old 06-30-2004, 08:01 PM   #6 (permalink)
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yuhh this was tight nice piece man
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Old 07-02-2004, 08:04 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 07-02-2004, 12:03 PM   #8 (permalink)
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this was a cool reflective peice. it seemed kinda broad in parts but the rhyme schemes were nice.
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Old 07-06-2004, 01:30 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I was really feelin the aggression in this piece. Speakin your mind big time in this one. I was feelin the start the most. You just came out aggressin and addressin. Keep the ink flowin ...peace.
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Old 07-06-2004, 03:45 PM   #10 (permalink)
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damn..this was real nice..kinda makes my mind run.....really makes me wanna get out my pen and write something allong the same lines

very nice...
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look in the eyes of evil, he's probably anglo-saxon
restricting masses, since his monopoly angle's taxing


That was dope.. Keep up man.. Where you from in london by the way?
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Old 07-11-2004, 02:56 PM   #12 (permalink)
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and peace on the feedback peoples, shit's important..
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Old 07-11-2004, 05:27 PM   #13 (permalink)
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like wicked, I was feelin the beginnin the more...but the rest of it was still off the hook...good drop, very passionate way to express yourself and your thoughts...
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Old 07-11-2004, 06:26 PM   #14 (permalink)
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that was a nice poem. well spoken, definitely a strong voice.

cool.

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Old 07-14-2004, 05:30 AM   #15 (permalink)
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def' appreciated xero, chyll

thanks for taking the time out to peep this..
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Old 07-17-2004, 09:23 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Word, the aggression in this i could really feel from you. Nice flow throughtout, and your message came off unsuppressed.

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I read this a few days back, yo...

I'm seriously feeling your multies.. and vocab. Thats the kind of shyt I personally LOVE. The content was excelllent. It had a brilliant message, yo... this was hella dope.


"overused platitudes, showing emotions as see through
merely empty words to me- a product of social upheaval
look in the eyes of evil, he's probably anglo-saxon
restricting masses, since his monopoly angle's taxing
stifling blacks, i'm attacking corrupt babylonians
soon to burn as a catalyst for fire like petroleum"

That is SICK^^ Man, I can't wait 'til I discover shyt like that, I'd love writing some shyt like that... *grows up* lol.. take care yo.
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Old 07-19-2004, 04:12 PM   #19 (permalink)
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u 3 above me; thanks for the feedback y'all.. this was a part vent, part written, n hopefully the words/content id chosen ekoved a few emotions in y'all, as well as jus flowing well..

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