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Old 04-08-2004, 10:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Illustration of Dedication to Poetry
The mind, body and soul unify in a collaboration
Of explorations translated in their creation
Motivation is inspired by oceans of emotion
Forming waves that crash against shores after explosion
To plant the seeds that randomly grow in their relentlessness
And brought futher when nurtured through a rhythmic photosynthesis
An extensive lift carries thoughts into the clouds
Where winds whisper their written scriptures out aloud
In the darkness of sight moons rise in this flight
They all shine bright to provide the night light
I write and my mind travels through the words
Of galaxies and actively search the universe
For gateways that display the ways of thier invention
Giving me the comprehension to enter this dimension
A treasure of the pleasures close to me as it's suppose to be
This peom illustrates my dedication to poetry.
 
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Old 04-09-2004, 04:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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You put your words together cleverly. I think this would make a dope spoken word joint. The flow was there for it.

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Old 04-10-2004, 09:43 AM   #3 (permalink)
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yeah i like this...slick lil piece..said a lot in a short poem..i like how it seems to have levels to it..very nice job
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Old 04-12-2004, 08:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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This was good. The words collaborated nicely. This would indeed make a good spoken word. I like poems defining the passion toward poetry too. Good drop. Keep the ink flowin.
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Old 04-12-2004, 08:56 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Flow was tight, Kind of had a certain rhythim to it. Just reading it the words followed a beat and it was hot. The word usage was off the chain and everything went together nicely. The piece was good


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this was very visual...

"Motivation is inspired by oceans of emotion
Forming waves that crash against shores after explosion
To plant the seeds that randomly grow in their relentlessness
And brought futher when nurtured through a rhythmic photosynthesis
An extensive lift carries thoughts into the clouds
Where winds whisper their written scriptures out aloud
In the darkness of sight moons rise in this flight
They all shine bright to provide the night light"

very well written...
almost an effortless type of flow...
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Old 04-15-2004, 03:35 PM   #7 (permalink)
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^^^agrees i think this piece was really good actually.....the flow seemed to come together perfectly and there was just a interesting way that it was conveyed.none the less nice piece man...very well written...

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Old 04-17-2004, 02:16 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks everyone.... I've been more inspired to write battle raps lately, but I'm making me way back the poetical realm... Gravy... yall liked it...

 
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Old 04-20-2004, 07:45 AM   #9 (permalink)
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keep em coming... I'm finna read some more of yall poems tomorrow..... I'm hella tired
 
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Old 04-20-2004, 05:54 PM   #10 (permalink)
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"I write and my mind travels through the words
Of galaxies and actively search the universe
For gateways that display the ways of thier invention" - shit was sick, rhyme scheme was there and all of that, diggin your concept for this poem.
"Motivation is inspired by oceans of emotion
Forming waves that crash against shores after explosion
To plant the seeds that randomly grow in their relentlessness
And brought futher when nurtured through a rhythmic photosynthesis
An extensive lift carries thoughts into the clouds
Where winds whisper their written scriptures out aloud" - once again, I'm loving the rhyme scheme, and how good your words flowed together. Loving when you rhymed winds whisper w/ written scriptures. I'd give this piece a near perfect, 9.5/10. I think it could have flowed a little better, that's all. Keep up the good shit, duecez
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