Repost...."Laughing through the tears"

OmniscientOmen · 11-04-2003, 09:46 PM

This is something I posted a few months back...I didnt get to much feedback thought I would repost it. If you read it already just disregard.

Scars come with love...and over time you become numb to the pain...My hatred for my love is all consuming...
I have lost hope and it seems to be nothing but a weakness now...But, I wont cry...that is for the weak...
I will move on...
let her love to her hearts content....
she will find out one day just as I have that love does not exist...
it is the answer to human weakness...
We put all of ourself into one person cause we are afraid to live life alone...
although this is a depressing outlook, its a realistic one...

and then I laugh...

Scars come with love...and over time you learn to embrace them, and you learn to love the pain that comes with love because it reminds you of your love...
My hope for love burns just as bright as ever despite the tears I cry..
The tears let me know that I in fact still love...
I will move on...
Let her love to her hearts content...
Hopefully she never has to feel the pain that I feel...and if she does...
I will stand there as a friend, and let her wash her pain in my hope...
We put all of ourself into one person because our love is so strong that we can not keep it to ourselves...
although this is a slightly over optimistic outlook, its a realistic one...

and then I cry...

Mind~$oul · 11-05-2003, 02:32 AM

"We put all of ourself into one person cause we are afraid to live life alone...
although this is a depressing outlook, its a realistic one..."

Those lines stood out the most to me man. I dont think i remember seein this piece from you, but it's a damn good one, and it shouldnt be slept on. Good job

one luv

TrufDXaggerator · 11-06-2003, 12:05 PM

I agree no poet should get slept on i dont kno about u but im not a matress. Anybody whose willin to live there life on paper and put there heart on the net deserves feedback.
Yo dis was nice it reminds me of some of my pieces but u got a different style. I could picture someone readin this out loud. Keep writin and doin YO thang.
Truthfuly Speakin and Truf Fully Spittin OUT

in4it · 11-06-2003, 01:41 PM

this was tight I liked it keep writing

mavrik... · 11-06-2003, 02:09 PM

dope man.
your form was really good on this one.
the read was nice as well.

a like the relation of love to hurt .. nicely done.
keep writing.

11-04-2003, 09:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
OmniscientOmen Omen Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: San Bernardino...I.E California all day Posts: 232	Repost...."Laughing through the tears" This is something I posted a few months back...I didnt get to much feedback thought I would repost it. If you read it already just disregard. Scars come with love...and over time you become numb to the pain...My hatred for my love is all consuming... I have lost hope and it seems to be nothing but a weakness now...But, I wont cry...that is for the weak... I will move on... let her love to her hearts content.... she will find out one day just as I have that love does not exist... it is the answer to human weakness... We put all of ourself into one person cause we are afraid to live life alone... although this is a depressing outlook, its a realistic one... and then I laugh... Scars come with love...and over time you learn to embrace them, and you learn to love the pain that comes with love because it reminds you of your love... My hope for love burns just as bright as ever despite the tears I cry.. The tears let me know that I in fact still love... I will move on... Let her love to her hearts content... Hopefully she never has to feel the pain that I feel...and if she does... I will stand there as a friend, and let her wash her pain in my hope... We put all of ourself into one person because our love is so strong that we can not keep it to ourselves... although this is a slightly over optimistic outlook, its a realistic one... and then I cry...

11-05-2003, 02:32 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	"We put all of ourself into one person cause we are afraid to live life alone... although this is a depressing outlook, its a realistic one..." Those lines stood out the most to me man. I dont think i remember seein this piece from you, but it's a damn good one, and it shouldnt be slept on. Good job one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

11-06-2003, 01:41 PM	#4 (permalink)
in4it this is the way we roll Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Da Ill state aint no love in it Posts: 2,778	this was tight I liked it keep writing __________________ IN LOVING MEMORY OF FRANCISCO J. REYES JR YOU WILL ALWAYS BE IN OUR HEARTS FEB. 10 1984 TO JAN. 9 2004 R.I.P

11-06-2003, 02:09 PM	#5 (permalink)
mavrik... Lyrically Transparent ... Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: North Carolina Posts: 201	dope man. your form was really good on this one. the read was nice as well. a like the relation of love to hurt .. nicely done. keep writing. __________________ Trasparent Individuals It's a daily face that I put on. Just to evade the ways you prolong. So when you see me, I'm here, but I'm gone. (-Mavrik)

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11-06-2003, 12:05 PM	#3 (permalink)
TrufDXaggerator Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Memphis Posts: 329	I agree no poet should get slept on i dont kno about u but im not a matress. Anybody whose willin to live there life on paper and put there heart on the net deserves feedback. Yo dis was nice it reminds me of some of my pieces but u got a different style. I could picture someone readin this out loud. Keep writin and doin YO thang. Truthfuly Speakin and Truf Fully Spittin OUT

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