from me

GilbertGrape · 11-04-2003, 04:31 AM

take a look whose smiling now.
people came from miles around.
to hear a song or see the sights.
and on my own ill be tonight....with me

far away from long ago.
took it here the common goal.
as for those ive tried them all.
do suppose...if i recall....from me

fight or flight i cant decide.
here i am my hands are tied.
so... step away or stand aside ..
for she alone commands the ride...for me

sagacious infant · 11-04-2003, 11:53 AM

easy to read, challenge to interpret...read it five times and i could say only what i am saying now about it...

it flows nicely enough

D i a m o n d · 11-08-2003, 12:00 AM

yeah this does flow nicely and yes i did interpret it in MANY MANY ways....I like these kinds

Mind~$oul · 11-09-2003, 01:48 AM

Great piece, i was feelin the second lil stanza the most. I gotta go with diamond on this, you can interpret this in many different ways. Uppin for the sleepers

one luv

11-04-2003, 04:31 AM	#1 (permalink)
GilbertGrape charles bucket Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 1,065	from me take a look whose smiling now. people came from miles around. to hear a song or see the sights. and on my own ill be tonight....with me far away from long ago. took it here the common goal. as for those ive tried them all. do suppose...if i recall....from me fight or flight i cant decide. here i am my hands are tied. so... step away or stand aside .. for she alone commands the ride...for me __________________ i feel like feeling something

11-08-2003, 12:00 AM	#3 (permalink)
D i a m o n d Pretty Pink, Baby Blue Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: I stay with ya daddy...ask him about me Posts: 7,809	yeah this does flow nicely and yes i did interpret it in MANY MANY ways....I like these kinds __________________ Mind Soul Could Get It Diamond Nahd aka Five of Hearts aka The Renegade

11-09-2003, 01:48 AM	#4 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,145	Great piece, i was feelin the second lil stanza the most. I gotta go with diamond on this, you can interpret this in many different ways. Uppin for the sleepers one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

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11-04-2003, 11:53 AM	#2 (permalink)
sagacious infant reflecting the sun Join Date: Sep 1999 Location: Joisy Posts: 14,465	easy to read, challenge to interpret...read it five times and i could say only what i am saying now about it... it flows nicely enough

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