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Old 10-08-2003, 08:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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.....a prayer.....
dear lord,

lately i've been thinking
contemplating my extinction
mocking my own reason
for living, a human being
i was birthed, but yet
society doesnt accept me
rather suspect me as guilty
sings song of murder
repeatedly, *click* now
i'm loaded, all this shit
has just unfolded, this
clip is my only supporter
that why i believe
he will send me away,
i should aim for my heart
its broken, let me start
i'm focused, i'm ready
i'm edgy, im holding it
controlling my future,
i'm past the excuses, past
language been abusive,
happiness remains elusive,
STOP THINKING AND PULL
my heart is now pacing like
stallions its racing, i'm facing
myself..squeezing this trigger
if light it exposes the truth
then all my life i've been lied too.

amen

*commits suicide*
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Old 10-08-2003, 10:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this reminds me of a piece i would write when i'm high..my mind runs off like this a lot..i like the piece..ofcourse u know that its been done before..but u did a nice job with it man...lol @your sig....good shit plague
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Old 10-08-2003, 10:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i can definately relate to this peice in so many ways...beautiful and intense, i loved how u added the 'stop thinking' part because that i can relate to...great work
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Old 10-09-2003, 12:11 AM   #4 (permalink)
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yeah dope piece man, had my adrenaline going. lol@the sig

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this would sound nice outloud......had a nice flow/rhythm to it.....nice reading something from you boi : )

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yeah this piece was tight defenitly feelin it nice piece
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This piece was Real, nice ish...like a venting piece. Keep writing and keep your head up.

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[quote=6th_plague]dear lord,

lately i've been thinking
contemplating my extinction
mocking my own reason
for living, a human being
i was birthed, but yet
society doesnt accept me
rather suspect me as guilty
sings song of murder
repeatedly, *click* now
i'm loaded, all this shit
has just unfolded, this
clip is my only supporter
that why i believe
he will send me away,
i should aim for my heart
its broken, let me start
i'm focused, i'm ready
i'm edgy, im holding it
controlling my future,
i'm past the excuses, past
language been abusive,
happiness remains elusive,
STOP THINKING AND PULL
my heart is now pacing like
stallions its racing, i'm facing
myself..squeezing this trigger
if light it exposes the truth
then all my life i've been lied too.

amen

*commits suicide*[/QUOTE

this tha type of drops i love..very real...very open...extremely dark yet lined wit shadows so there is light..u jus elevate all the time..what i mean is..every piece u drop is different and unique and i like those peeps who have variety....i kn ow everyone can relate to this mos def because this reflect realness...i really enjoyed this ang....u ••••• neva stop writin....~keep elevatin and one love always...u got skills beyond ya pen~
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Old 10-11-2003, 02:22 PM   #9 (permalink)
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all I can say is damn.....that just...hmmm
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Old 10-11-2003, 09:57 PM   #10 (permalink)
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like mocha said shit's real...the emotion was strong and was relayed very well, the flow was surprisingly hot, I say surprisingly jus because these kind of poems usually dont flow like this....very touching piece...I loved it


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