From Love To Lost(vent)

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Old 10-07-2003, 09:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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From Love To Lost(vent)
More Than Words pt.2
I sense feelings with you that are sincerely true
I could disapear for years and still feel these feelings for you
I write about you everyday cus to explain in everyway how I feel
Theres no better way for me to display something so real
Yo sister may see these lines and think that Im just speaking nice
But this is how I express my heart and Free my mind of things from deep inside
Writing about you is never just an act of skill
Its how I deal with thoughts instilled
In my mind and heart I find you are the one penetrating like the sharpest darts
Ill continue to do all I can to get you to undastand that I can be your man
I want the rest to know that me and you are like sticky glue...
Inseperable
I think I Love You
But its hard for me to express my soul
But I know for sho that I could never let you go
Special Intellectual and dress the best with clothes
You aren't from these parts youre something celestial
Like an Angel
I try to arrange my flow to cover every angle so the less fortunate can know what Tane knows
Its unusal cause I cant undastand why a man wouldn't be true to you
From yo legs to yo eyes to behind to yo mind
Youre Beautiful from yo head to yo cuticles
I had to let you know
I want you to be mine

Just Pain and Loss Vent
She said she was mine 4eva and always
Now its just I
Heart severed from all ways

NOW

I feel Hurling Swirling winds
Ive lost my girl but not my friend
Now Im torn and my world has come to an end
I can no longer defend
What I thought would be IT
A beautiful relationship
I truly hate this shit
What we call Life
I call death in existence filled with trife
Strife sharper than the sharpest knife
To take apart my life
Ive experienced pain like this
But now eyes cry like rain from IT
A Broken Heart
A provoked remark that only hopes to start the finish
Of my worthless livin’
Cus I feel its not worth livin
It only takes from all It’s given
When I thought I was walking wit an angle
I find my self alone cold heart broke and mangled
We’re all products of our environment
I must be grade A certified shit
Im tired of IT
Life as a whole
Its like theres a hole
Made for those who stroll along on this lone road of sorrow
Whats promise today is only a hope tomorrow

She said she was mine 4eva and always
Now its just I
Heart severed from all ways
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Old 10-07-2003, 09:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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wow....deep shit right here....
I feel ya on this no doubt.....the heart is the strongest muscle yet so easily it breaks.....
The poem itself was expressed very well I love the emotion in it.....keep ya head up

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Old 10-07-2003, 11:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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^i agree, you expressed yourself well within the poem. thought you had dip'd out on us for a sec...

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I feel Hurling Swirling winds
Ive lost my girl but not my friend
Now Im torn and my world has come to an end
I can no longer defend
What I thought would be IT
A beautiful relationship
I truly hate this shit

Made for those who stroll along on this lone road of sorrow
Whats promise today is only a hope tomorrow

She said she was mine 4eva and always
Now its just I
Heart severed from all ways



not that the first poem was beautiful im just feeling this alittle more these are the lines that struck me. up^
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Old 10-08-2003, 12:46 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Yo Im neva gone from The Realm consider me a permanent residence, i jus needed somethin to fuel the fire.Thanx for the feedback.uppin
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Old 10-08-2003, 08:54 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 10-09-2003, 07:14 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Definetly a heartfelt piece....i loved it from beggining to end indeed....

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"We’re all products of our environment
I must be grade A certified shit"

... the seriousness of the poem was, well I laughed man.

Seriously, I liked the entire drop at the ending.
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this was tight loved the wholoe thing dam nice drop
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