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Old 09-24-2003, 04:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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stress (vent piece)
It bothers me when you say i dont care.
Youre standing there waiting for the elevator
when you could have taken the stairs....
My stares are cold but
I warned you from the beginning....
Loving me will not satisfy your needs
because there isn't enough of me to share
Yet.
Don't settle for a piece of
something
that hasn't had a chance to bloom into
everything.
It bothers me when you say i dont care.
It bothers me when you say i'm mean
simply because i'm not ready to be your queen.
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Old 09-24-2003, 04:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this is some real shit...sometimes, people aren't ready, and the other person needs to realize that...
i'm diggin
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Old 09-24-2003, 05:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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i think venting pieces are some of the best pieces, i loved this one, mostly cause i can relate to it a lot... great job as always
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Old 09-24-2003, 06:07 PM   #4 (permalink)
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that was very good

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Old 09-24-2003, 06:23 PM   #5 (permalink)
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From what I picked up, you were telling him basically you are too young for that type of commitment and you have yet to bloom into the beautiful flower you will become, so there is no way he can have all of you, because you dont even have it yet. Nice poem
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Old 09-24-2003, 06:30 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Ndividual
this is some real shit...sometimes, people aren't ready, and the other person needs to realize that...
i'm diggin
Thus the signs of my last relationship, some people dont understand that people need time to bloom into what they are supposed to be. Anyway, I liked this piece, just switch it to my view and I could definitely relate to you. Looks like you and I will be sharing a drink after all Madame Sole...
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Old 09-25-2003, 12:17 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Very nice...i really enjoyed it...short, to the point, and well said

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Old 09-25-2003, 12:23 AM   #8 (permalink)
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nice drop feme....most def can feel this piece.....love and relationships are crazy....glad i found the person i want to spend the rest of my life with already....

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Old 09-25-2003, 12:59 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Well said I wish I could yell this piece out but yeah nicely convey'd.
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Old 09-25-2003, 01:13 AM   #10 (permalink)
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short but you said what you had to say in those few words

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Old 09-25-2003, 01:52 AM   #11 (permalink)
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I like the "Yet."

That was my favorite line.
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