Fuck The World..

Brown_Menace · 08-13-2003, 11:26 PM

Fuck the police... Fuck the beast..
Fuck those who betray our trust..
Thier criminals themselves.. crooked ass wealth..
Fuck you bitch.. I am me you can't change that bitch...
bitch you afraid of dogs.. But you are one...
Fuck the assholes who judge soley upon race..
Ye I'm brown so what.. you bleed the same when you cut..
I'm angry.. leave ur ass stiff and black like a hockey puck..
Fuck those who oppose.. You wanna kill me?...
I keep stainless steel and bust those.. concrete heart..
no remorse instead I boast.. In front of your friends..
Fuck those who get jealous at my ends.. hence...
I make money.. You cant.. Your hustles weak.. less intense..
So you envy mine.. jelous S.O.B.'s dont make common cents..
Fuck Whites, Blacks, Yellows, And Brown.. Fuck the rainbow..
there ain't no pot of gold.. just pain.. exposed bold..
Fuck hoe's... who act like they shit dont stink.. with those clothes
cleavage shows like half naked.. N' thats why you got raped bitch.
Fuck the wood for bats.. fuck the steel for gats...
fuck the deal for crack.. fuck the projects infact..
fuck you.. you.. and you.. matter of fact.. fuck all of you..
everyone trapped in gods fish bowl.. we call the earth..
whats it worth?.. with more years more questions...
live till my death sentence.. but i dont wanna be buried..
I wanna disappear in a hurry.. disappear from lifes furies..
disappear like magic.. no one knows what happened..
he was just here.. now his memory blackened..
into a deep black hole.. where mysteries remain untold..
Fuck those who live to impress.. fuck those all for status..
remain blessed.. my hearts geography is like an atlas..
Fuck actors and actresses.. Fuck athletes.. bitch fuck me..
fuck luxuries.. fuck money.. fuck terrorists.. head wrapped..
like a mummy.. shit ain't funny.. 21st century shits hectic..
so thats why fuck everybody.. fuck ma girl - fuck the world.....

lpoet · 08-13-2003, 11:42 PM

this was a cool piece......i've written a couple fuck the world pieces myself...infact i'm sure a lot of people have......seems more like a vent then something that was really thought out....i thought that there was a couple of places were u could have left out the fucks....and i wasnt really feelin the fuck my girl line either...but overall nice piece....

oh

and welcome to the realm...i see u was dropin replies 2...nice to see cats come in here and show love to the other poets when they drop there work

Upin for ya

Brown_Menace · 08-13-2003, 11:56 PM

im not new its jibran...

lpoet · 08-13-2003, 11:57 PM

^lol...oh my bad....never seen u under this name

*Princess* · 08-14-2003, 12:20 AM

i've never written a fuck the world poem..but i've read a few....this was good piece, i noticed how the last line said "so thats why fuck everybody.. fuck ma girl - fuck the world....."

kinda made me think this was all about your girl....i dunno though...nice job

Brown_Menace · 08-14-2003, 12:43 AM

thanks for the peepin'

Dark_Angel · 08-14-2003, 02:17 AM

Ye I'm brown so what.. you bleed the same when you cut..

yeah i have never written one of these mite try one day, but this seemed like a great peice to read if u want to do one, it inspires me. nice work

misspimp · 08-14-2003, 02:21 AM

very emotional...i loved this piece....fuck the world...dont ask me for shit...u know the rest...this was a tight ass piece....keep em comin

mad love

Brown_Menace · 08-14-2003, 02:49 AM

thanks this wasn't about my girl but i feel like shit right now.. this girl was diggin me hard but when she found out i wuz muslim, she told me it wouldn't work cuz she wuz christian.. loooong story, too long. but thanks for checkin me, respex

Deficiency · 08-14-2003, 03:39 AM

i didn't really feel it.. but, im not gonna diss you.. i think you got skills.. if you keep at it. I just don't really like this piece..

j$crILLa · 08-14-2003, 01:24 PM

damn im really feeelin this peice... you also had a rap-poetry style to it... and i must agree wit you 'FUCK THE WORLD'

holla

in4it · 08-14-2003, 01:43 PM

Yeah I agree with j$crILLa it did have a rap-poetry style to it was feeling it I to agree with fuck the world

disciplestylez · 08-14-2003, 02:31 PM

this poem was good....i could feel you displaying your feelings.......

GOD bless

MisterEThoughts · 08-14-2003, 02:49 PM

this was nice i can see definitely a lot of hate shit but this was hot keep it up

49th Prophet · 08-14-2003, 10:29 PM

feelin it, everyone feels like that at times, nice vent...much love

peace

Thrilla-Ali · 01-22-2008, 07:23 PM

LMAO this was me yeeeeeeeeears ago! (im brown menace)

I'm bumping this because i think it deserves some more views, i re-read it and i think its worth it in my opinion. Peace

08-13-2003, 11:26 PM	#1 (permalink)
Brown_Menace Honey Hitta Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: TDoT BreDRoNNN Posts: 1,243	Fuck The World.. Fuck the police... Fuck the beast.. Fuck those who betray our trust.. Thier criminals themselves.. crooked ass wealth.. Fuck you bitch.. I am me you can't change that bitch... bitch you afraid of dogs.. But you are one... Fuck the assholes who judge soley upon race.. Ye I'm brown so what.. you bleed the same when you cut.. I'm angry.. leave ur ass stiff and black like a hockey puck.. Fuck those who oppose.. You wanna kill me?... I keep stainless steel and bust those.. concrete heart.. no remorse instead I boast.. In front of your friends.. Fuck those who get jealous at my ends.. hence... I make money.. You cant.. Your hustles weak.. less intense.. So you envy mine.. jelous S.O.B.'s dont make common cents.. Fuck Whites, Blacks, Yellows, And Brown.. Fuck the rainbow.. there ain't no pot of gold.. just pain.. exposed bold.. Fuck hoe's... who act like they shit dont stink.. with those clothes cleavage shows like half naked.. N' thats why you got raped bitch. Fuck the wood for bats.. fuck the steel for gats... fuck the deal for crack.. fuck the projects infact.. fuck you.. you.. and you.. matter of fact.. fuck all of you.. everyone trapped in gods fish bowl.. we call the earth.. whats it worth?.. with more years more questions... live till my death sentence.. but i dont wanna be buried.. I wanna disappear in a hurry.. disappear from lifes furies.. disappear like magic.. no one knows what happened.. he was just here.. now his memory blackened.. into a deep black hole.. where mysteries remain untold.. Fuck those who live to impress.. fuck those all for status.. remain blessed.. my hearts geography is like an atlas.. Fuck actors and actresses.. Fuck athletes.. bitch fuck me.. fuck luxuries.. fuck money.. fuck terrorists.. head wrapped.. like a mummy.. shit ain't funny.. 21st century shits hectic.. so thats why fuck everybody.. fuck ma girl - fuck the world.....

08-13-2003, 11:42 PM	#2 (permalink)
lpoet POET Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 12,672	this was a cool piece......i've written a couple fuck the world pieces myself...infact i'm sure a lot of people have......seems more like a vent then something that was really thought out....i thought that there was a couple of places were u could have left out the fucks....and i wasnt really feelin the fuck my girl line either...but overall nice piece.... oh and welcome to the realm...i see u was dropin replies 2...nice to see cats come in here and show love to the other poets when they drop there work Upin for ya __________________ "SHE CAME BACK TO ME AND I PRAY SHE STAYS" --lpoet

08-13-2003, 11:56 PM	#3 (permalink)
Brown_Menace Honey Hitta Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: TDoT BreDRoNNN Posts: 1,243	im not new its jibran... __________________ i fixed your sig ya dunce

08-13-2003, 11:57 PM	#4 (permalink)
lpoet POET Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 12,672	^lol...oh my bad....never seen u under this name __________________ "SHE CAME BACK TO ME AND I PRAY SHE STAYS" --lpoet

08-14-2003, 12:43 AM	#6 (permalink)
Brown_Menace Honey Hitta Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: TDoT BreDRoNNN Posts: 1,243	this is me thanks for the peepin' __________________ i fixed your sig ya dunce

08-14-2003, 12:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
Princess skantless bitch Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 591	i've never written a fuck the world poem..but i've read a few....this was good piece, i noticed how the last line said "so thats why fuck everybody.. fuck ma girl - fuck the world....." kinda made me think this was all about your girl....i dunno though...nice job

08-14-2003, 02:17 AM	#7 (permalink)
Dark_Angel Dark_Angel Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 798	Ye I'm brown so what.. you bleed the same when you cut.. yeah i have never written one of these mite try one day, but this seemed like a great peice to read if u want to do one, it inspires me. nice work

08-14-2003, 02:21 AM	#8 (permalink)
misspimp a.k.a KATURAH Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Virginia Is For Lovers Posts: 1,308	very emotional...i loved this piece....fuck the world...dont ask me for shit...u know the rest...this was a tight ass piece....keep em comin mad love __________________ MAD LOVE "Never to suffer would never to have been blessed" ~THE LATE GREAT ~ ~EDGAR ALLEN POE ~

08-14-2003, 02:49 AM	#9 (permalink)
Brown_Menace Honey Hitta Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: TDoT BreDRoNNN Posts: 1,243	thanks this wasn't about my girl but i feel like shit right now.. this girl was diggin me hard but when she found out i wuz muslim, she told me it wouldn't work cuz she wuz christian.. loooong story, too long. but thanks for checkin me, respex __________________ i fixed your sig ya dunce

08-14-2003, 03:39 AM	#10 (permalink)
Deficiency True Poetical Emcee Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 455	i didn't really feel it.. but, im not gonna diss you.. i think you got skills.. if you keep at it. I just don't really like this piece.. __________________ "My insides are a lonely prisoner grasping for love with screams but, heard as a whisper. To kiss her, to hold her is a far away thought.. engraved into my head and never lived."-Deficiency

08-14-2003, 01:24 PM	#11 (permalink)
j$crILLa ~$crill-DeVille~ Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: NORTHSYDE MADcity wisconsin Posts: 12,636	damn im really feeelin this peice... you also had a rap-poetry style to it... and i must agree wit you 'FUCK THE WORLD' holla __________________ j$crILLa aka Cadillac'J' Drunkest Mu'fucka on RM. $crillVille This is My world +North$yde+ *<Money> Alcohol <Bitchez>*

08-14-2003, 01:43 PM	#12 (permalink)
in4it this is the way we roll Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Da Ill state aint no love in it Posts: 2,778	Yeah I agree with j$crILLa it did have a rap-poetry style to it was feeling it I to agree with fuck the world

08-14-2003, 02:31 PM	#13 (permalink)
disciplestylez Broken Soul Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 88	this poem was good....i could feel you displaying your feelings....... GOD bless __________________ They say a man is lost without a prayer, without a song/so im singin on my knees cuz i believe you'll keep me strong

08-14-2003, 02:49 PM	#14 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	this was nice i can see definitely a lot of hate shit but this was hot keep it up __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

08-14-2003, 10:29 PM	#15 (permalink)
49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: City Of Fire Posts: 1,239	feelin it, everyone feels like that at times, nice vent...much love peace __________________

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01-22-2008, 07:23 PM	#16 (permalink)
Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: TDOT Posts: 4,824	LMAO this was me yeeeeeeeeears ago! (im brown menace) I'm bumping this because i think it deserves some more views, i re-read it and i think its worth it in my opinion. Peace __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies Watching T.V. is like digging through trash

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