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Old 07-01-2003, 02:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I wrote this for the RSTL but I feel its sort of poetic, I was wondering what ya'll that of this...

violent wind gusts randomly switch to calm breeze in varied forces
as it dusts away debris of tombstones through the buried corpses
reactless here what interrupts any brief occurence of relax is fear
you merely tremble during every eery sound in the atmosphere
arranged in rows n columns graves is looked upon wit solemn gazes
each figure residin in the morgue's spirit lives on we call em ageless
departure of the lone exception was met with a tragic neglect
forgotten but since its passin its death's had the most drastic effect
one whose spirit died, attempted ta hold back emotion sincerely tried
universe was affected when one merely died stood froze n teary eyed
headstones date was wrong you died long ago many failed ta notice
after chokin up multiple times i managed to regain my trail of focus
cuz of ur death peoples actions are astray such a tragical loss
now desire for vengeance and revenge overtakes all rational thought
abusive parents exist, as bruises form the child becomes invisible
to others cuz they're too scared or lazy to help fail to act on principle
parents abandon babies dont care or are scared of bein responsible
chances of tha infant receiving proper guidance isnt highly probable
children are no longer safe inside of the house of Gods confessional
blamed when school shootins wouldnt happen if guns werent accessible
men reject a woman wit all tha attributes caring gorgeous elegant
for a ho cuz she fuck quicker then bail at child support settlements
growin disrespect towards carin mothers quickly came too
live in a mansion she still in tha run down crib in which she raised you
girls sell their bodies on the streets take they beauty fa granted
abuse takes a toll but in they fragile soul lies truly the damage
women of all ages are never safe cuz men are physically dominant
abusive dont care who they victimize if they name remains anonymous
cats flossin buyin everything from whips ta ice when help is urgent
for starving Africans who cant get a drop of ice...the melted version
watch gangsta movies attemptin to achieve a falsified disguise
all these factors contributin to the world as i see it qualify demise
as i overlook the severity of the situation prayin its all a fallocy
i've come to the realization that its not...rest in peace morality
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Old 07-01-2003, 05:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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imagery was incredible, but damn next time you post something make it bigger please lol

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Old 07-01-2003, 05:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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oh shit.. thats some tiny writing lol... took me like 10 minutes to read...

my two favorite lines were..

"abusive parents exist, as bruises form the child becomes invisible
to others cuz they're too scared or lazy to help fail to act on principle"

"abuse takes a toll but in they fragile soul lies truly the damage"

i was feelin the whole thing tho... just make it bigger next time lol
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Old 07-02-2003, 12:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks ya'll i'll make tha font bigger next time uppin
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Old 07-02-2003, 01:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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imagery was incredible, but damn next time you post something make it bigger please lol

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my words exactly...
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Old 07-03-2003, 10:22 PM   #6 (permalink)
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shit was raw as fuck...but the font man the fong......i wont even say anything else....lol


like mind said...imagery was dope as fuck.....i saw the whole thing.........really nice piece..

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thanks appreciate it...and fine i'll change the font now!
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Old 07-04-2003, 02:42 PM   #9 (permalink)
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dunno now stop clogging my thread!!! haha

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