My Life Has Been A Mistake

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Old 07-01-2003, 11:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My Life Has Been A Mistake
Sometimes I wonder why did I take the narrow path?
Now I wished I could go back to where the arrows at
I've changed my mind once again and too many times
I haven't had a good life and I'm tired of standing in it's line
Waiting and hoping for something thats much better than this
I once thought I was smart but so many signs I have missed
So many mistakes occurred and time has been wasted
I don't see why people want to drive me crazy
My soul is in a coma and my thoughts are experiencing a flood
I just lay and cry that I dont know if I can deal with all this stuff
It's like my mind is 2 people that are fighting with each other
One is a friend and the other is a lover
And thinking too much has caused me so must aggravation
I thought life would get better but I have no patience
I feel like running away but I have nowhere to go
Away from everything but then I like and I don't like being alone
Half the time I don't make sense and other times I don't try
And when things go wrong.......I just say thats life
I should have never been born into the imitation of perfection
Because I'm not perfect .......even for a heartbeat or a second
So when life leaves me it will be a gift for all my troubles
That my heart and mind has endured over time turned to dust and rubble
If I can face my life, then heaven and hell will not phase me
I might still walk around but my life ends daily........
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Old 07-01-2003, 12:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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"If I can face my life, then heaven and hell will not phase me
I might still walk around but my life ends daily........"

i know that feeling... great piece. had alot of emotion in it, and making it rhyme gets extra kudos from me!
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This was very emotional and heartfelt. Keep ya head up yo....

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wow. this was full of emotion...i kno the feelin tho... it sucks =( it was a great poem tho! lol
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Old 07-01-2003, 07:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks for the peep I will return the favor =)
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"I once thought I was smart but so many signs I have missed"<---I can relate to this or real. Nice drop...

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Old 07-01-2003, 10:03 PM   #7 (permalink)
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you ain't a mistake if you can weave that much emotion into a poem like that. you got my vote

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another heartfelt piece...painful to read really...touched me cuz i can definitly relate to this feeling.
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nice drop....very emotional and heartfelt....i can dig it....keep doing your thang...
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