Zions renaissance

Zionism · 07-01-2003, 09:26 AM

An end of the Arabian disease, which swept away us from our feet/
Jerusalem re-taken... and now zion slowly rewakens/
from a comatose state, healing wounds of the crescent, while the peasant-/
descendant of Isra'el tends to his sheep, the Sons of David weep/
Bedouin Arabs face the fate of the wanderin J.ew with no land/
occupation of our sands, they cant comprahend nor understand/
Soveriegnity of G-d's Chosen, was hopeless but not hopefull/
The restrictions of Ishmael go as surely their yoke-falls/
Shma yisra'el....your sons will always defend ur gates against Hell's/
While we walk the sands, ADONAI shall pravail....

varentao · 07-01-2003, 10:59 AM

It was raw and personal in an slightly controlled and 'intellectual' sense..which i liked...

...and i feel where you ar coming from. Though don't completely agree.

But i wont go into that...

...critique? Nah, not the type of piece to do that for me...

...resp...

*GeMiNeYeZ* · 07-01-2003, 12:56 PM

i like it. the assonance made it cool. it's a strong piece, with volcabulary to back it up. nice poem!

Zionism · 07-03-2003, 10:42 AM

thnx 4 the replies.

up.

iceheart · 07-03-2003, 01:49 PM

very intense work, liked the vocabulary, keep them coming.

iceheart

MisterEThoughts · 07-03-2003, 01:52 PM

damnnnn thats what i call fuckin hottt shit as hell beautiful man please keep writing mann damn

07-01-2003, 09:26 AM	#1 (permalink)
Zionism YEHUDI HU AKBAR Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: AMONG THE GOYIM Posts: 222	Zions renaissance An end of the Arabian disease, which swept away us from our feet/ Jerusalem re-taken... and now zion slowly rewakens/ from a comatose state, healing wounds of the crescent, while the peasant-/ descendant of Isra'el tends to his sheep, the Sons of David weep/ Bedouin Arabs face the fate of the wanderin J.ew with no land/ occupation of our sands, they cant comprahend nor understand/ Soveriegnity of G-d's Chosen, was hopeless but not hopefull/ The restrictions of Ishmael go as surely their yoke-falls/ Shma yisra'el....your sons will always defend ur gates against Hell's/ While we walk the sands, ADONAI shall pravail.... __________________ SHMA YISRA'EL, ADONAI ELOHEINU, ADONAI ECHAD ZION'S RENAISSANCE a poem http://www.board.rapmusic.com/showth...hreadid=594745 Last edited by Zionism; 07-05-2003 at 11:28 AM.

07-01-2003, 12:56 PM	#3 (permalink)
GeMiNeYeZ ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~ Join Date: May 2001 Location: District Heights, MD Posts: 11,131	i like it. the assonance made it cool. it's a strong piece, with volcabulary to back it up. nice poem! __________________ G e M i N e Y e Z ´·´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`·`Da Revolution´·´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`·` h \| g "If their purpose is of human origin, it will fail. But if it comes from God ...You cannot defeat them." ´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`Neon Genesis Evangelion´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`

07-03-2003, 10:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
Zionism YEHUDI HU AKBAR Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: AMONG THE GOYIM Posts: 222	thnx 4 the replies. up. __________________ SHMA YISRA'EL, ADONAI ELOHEINU, ADONAI ECHAD ZION'S RENAISSANCE a poem http://www.board.rapmusic.com/showth...hreadid=594745

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MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	damnnnn thats what i call fuckin hottt shit as hell beautiful man please keep writing mann damn __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

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07-01-2003, 10:59 AM	#2 (permalink)
varentao Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 765	It was raw and personal in an slightly controlled and 'intellectual' sense..which i liked... ...and i feel where you ar coming from. Though don't completely agree. But i wont go into that... ...critique? Nah, not the type of piece to do that for me... ...resp...

07-03-2003, 01:49 PM	#5 (permalink)
iceheart The Frozen Poet Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: antarctica - they sent me here citin some shit like "you are a danger to society" wtf. Posts: 692	very intense work, liked the vocabulary, keep them coming. iceheart

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