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Old 07-01-2003, 01:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Her Effect.

You're presence makes the wind curl in fear,
Takes the sun's rays and crosses them upon reflection,
You're looks make science a religion.
To speak of your name,
Makes the world's final day, seem to be a week.
I've never had a feeling that could run.
Go through my body and physically alter my heart,
I've watched my life go from sideways,
To upside down,
The resisting forces keep me from my passion,
It's you.

The world has looked upon me judge,
Has tried to persuade, and I still, no budge
Only thing it has done is grown a grudge,
I'm on my final breathe of tolerance,
My life is in shambles, need no ambulance,
You were there for me, keeping my balance,
Sensual care and sexual air,
You're the final prayer,
It's you, your my last dare.****

The final opposition approaches,
The approach itself hurts my blood,
My skin contracts and suffocates all feeling,
Numb from the head to hell,
This is why I wait for so long,
This pain hurts my mind,
The thought hurts my hands,
You're effect is incredible,
It's awesome,
And crushes my ideas,
So still I wait.
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Old 07-01-2003, 01:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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im feelin that... i loved the flow of it.. keep it coming
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Old 07-01-2003, 02:05 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 07-01-2003, 04:16 AM   #4 (permalink)
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"You're looks make science a religion."

Damn wicked you've been coming with some really nice shit lately. Nice flow and wordplay

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Old 07-01-2003, 02:48 PM   #5 (permalink)
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oooh... lovely. i wish i could have that affect on people..
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Yeaahhh...feelin this one for real. Very nice.
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Very nice piece...i loved it...

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