Seasons Change

Azeus_suezA · 06-30-2003, 11:41 PM

I feel it within
I'm alone again
Walls caving in
Soon realizin
That I know you're with another...

And you're only pretending to hold my heart;
It was buried with all those bones long ago in your closet...

MisterEThoughts · 07-01-2003, 12:23 AM

not bad to short wanted to see more from you this was nice no doubt keep blessing.

*GeMiNeYeZ* · 07-01-2003, 01:48 PM

yes it was short, but there was sooo much more meaning in the poem than the words itself... i like it!

Azeus_suezA · 07-10-2003, 04:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by *GeMiNeYeZ*

yes it was short, but there was sooo much more meaning in the poem than the words itself... i like it!

Thank you Gem.

Brit Boi Gee · 07-10-2003, 09:58 PM

short to the point and it came with alot of power and gave us understanfding of the pain of being left for someone suposedleybetter..

That which does not kill you, will only make you stronger..

stay up man, chin and head UP UP UP!

it aint no THING

MISSKEYdaQUEEN · 07-10-2003, 11:35 PM

It was blunt. It was what it was. Put in the way you needed it to be. It touched me. I dig it!

Azeus_suezA · 07-11-2003, 10:19 AM

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Originally Posted by Brit Boi Gee

short to the point and it came with alot of power and gave us understanfding of the pain of being left for someone suposedleybetter..

That which does not kill you, will only make you stronger..

stay up man, chin and head UP UP UP!

it aint no THING

When I wrote that it wasn't from my point of view.
I wrote it from the point of view of the girl that I was with at the time.

I was with a girl for 2 years who stuck with me while I cheated on her, and lived my life in a way that I can't believe anybody would live. She tolerated it because she was in love with me....

So when I finally got my shit together and realized who I was I tried to make myself feel the same way for her but couldn't. It was useless because she wasn't the one for me. I met that person who is meant for me in every way but couldn't be with her so I stayed with the girlfriend of 2 years and tried to love her the way she did me but couldn't. I was in love with this other girl.
Once I realized I realized how amazing this other girl was to me I couldn't pretend anymore so I ended what I had with the girl of 2 years to stop the pain I was causing her and to begin an honest relationship with the other girl.

When I wrote this I hadn't yet figured out that I couldn't make myself love her. I wish I had been a better Man to her but all I can do is correct that with the girl I have now. Although I'm not with this other girl in person she has my heart. An absolutely breathtaking woman who has the stars and the sea in her eyes.
Everything I've always dreamed of my wife being. By Christmas God willing i'll be with her where she is (I'll be moving there) and we wont have to do this distance thing but until then....We'll get through this with the help of The LORD.

lpoet · 07-11-2003, 10:37 AM

short and sweet..nice lil drop here

06-30-2003, 11:41 PM	#1 (permalink)
Azeus_suezA War N Peace/Peace N War Join Date: May 2002 Location: In Between The Highs And Lows Posts: 2,381	Seasons Change I feel it within I'm alone again Walls caving in Soon realizin That I know you're with another... And you're only pretending to hold my heart; It was buried with all those bones long ago in your closet... __________________ t.

07-01-2003, 12:23 AM	#2 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	not bad to short wanted to see more from you this was nice no doubt keep blessing. __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

07-01-2003, 01:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
GeMiNeYeZ ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~ Join Date: May 2001 Location: District Heights, MD Posts: 11,131	yes it was short, but there was sooo much more meaning in the poem than the words itself... i like it! __________________ G e M i N e Y e Z ´·´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`·`Da Revolution´·´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`·` h \| g "If their purpose is of human origin, it will fail. But if it comes from God ...You cannot defeat them." ´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`Neon Genesis Evangelion´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`

07-10-2003, 09:58 PM	#5 (permalink)
Brit Boi Gee manifest the zen Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Near To Athena Posts: 15,847	short to the point and it came with alot of power and gave us understanfding of the pain of being left for someone suposedleybetter.. That which does not kill you, will only make you stronger.. stay up man, chin and head UP UP UP! it aint no THING __________________ Those friends thou hast, and their adoption tried, Grapple them to thy soul with hoops of steel. -William Shakespeare Brit Boi has a highly calibrated wifermometer

07-10-2003, 11:35 PM	#6 (permalink)
MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther.. Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Glenville REPPIN BIYAAAATCHES!! Posts: 17,647	It was blunt. It was what it was. Put in the way you needed it to be. It touched me. I dig it! __________________ Queen's MySpace Page Queen's Other Myspace Page biaaatches *********************** The battles that count aren't the ones for gold medals. The struggles within yourself—the invisible, inevitable battles inside all of us—that's where it's at.~Jesse Owens (1913-1980)

07-11-2003, 10:37 AM	#8 (permalink)
lpoet POET Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 12,672	short and sweet..nice lil drop here __________________ "SHE CAME BACK TO ME AND I PRAY SHE STAYS" --lpoet

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