Never Ever

J-Smooth · 06-30-2003, 10:16 PM

blue

I was just coating, boating, toating my problems away I didn't even know
what she was thinking
See my lady
wanted attention
my lady wanted love

everytime she wanted it
I was nowhere to be found
I played with her heart
I played with emotions
and i made her cry

But It All ended
the day she said goodbye
See you never know a good thang
until its gone
and now am sittin here cryin

J-Smooth · 06-30-2003, 10:20 PM

hey ya'll i was just writeing and i came up with this i hope u like it

vinous · 06-30-2003, 10:37 PM

i like this. simple and truthful, nice. pz.

Mind~$oul · 06-30-2003, 11:57 PM

short, simple and to the point. Nice and it flowed well

one luv

*GeMiNeYeZ* · 07-01-2003, 01:52 PM

you never realize how good you had it until the tables are turned... great job.

J-Smooth · 07-03-2003, 08:28 AM

thanks 4 the love ya'll am uppin

skandelous_lala · 07-03-2003, 08:54 AM

pretty good..my only beef is that is just seemed to stop outta nowhere lol

06-30-2003, 10:16 PM	#1 (permalink)
J-Smooth The Smoothness Playa Join Date: May 2001 Location: Pimpville USA Posts: 248	Never Ever blue I was just coating, boating, toating my problems away I didn't even know what she was thinking See my lady wanted attention my lady wanted love everytime she wanted it I was nowhere to be found I played with her heart I played with emotions and i made her cry But It All ended the day she said goodbye See you never know a good thang until its gone and now am sittin here cryin __________________ The Smoothnessplaya you know the one with the suit on :)

06-30-2003, 10:20 PM	#2 (permalink)
J-Smooth The Smoothness Playa Join Date: May 2001 Location: Pimpville USA Posts: 248	hey ya'll i was just writeing and i came up with this i hope u like it __________________ The Smoothnessplaya you know the one with the suit on :)

06-30-2003, 10:37 PM	#3 (permalink)
vinous Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: in a house Posts: 368	i like this. simple and truthful, nice. pz. __________________ just take this longing from my tongue all the lonely things these hands have done

06-30-2003, 11:57 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	short, simple and to the point. Nice and it flowed well one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

07-01-2003, 01:52 PM	#5 (permalink)
GeMiNeYeZ ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~ Join Date: May 2001 Location: District Heights, MD Posts: 11,131	you never realize how good you had it until the tables are turned... great job. __________________ G e M i N e Y e Z ´·´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`·`Da Revolution´·´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`·` h \| g "If their purpose is of human origin, it will fail. But if it comes from God ...You cannot defeat them." ´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`Neon Genesis Evangelion´.`.·ìÌìÌìíÍíÍí·.´.`

07-03-2003, 08:28 AM	#6 (permalink)
J-Smooth The Smoothness Playa Join Date: May 2001 Location: Pimpville USA Posts: 248	thanks 4 the love ya'll am uppin __________________ The Smoothnessplaya you know the one with the suit on :)

07-03-2003, 08:54 AM	#7 (permalink)
skandelous_lala back from the dead Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: Hey! Fuck you and the horse you rode in on! Posts: 26,707	pretty good..my only beef is that is just seemed to stop outta nowhere lol __________________ ALL YOU REALLY KNOW IS WHAT I CHOOSE TO SHOW Good Mourning, Good afternoon, Good nite, what have you done with your life?. Everybody's time comes to be embraced by the light you only afraid to die when you ain't livin right

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