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Old 06-30-2003, 08:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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“We are Lost boys
Lost soul with pride of gold
A coward maybe,
is Amen to bold
Maybe to direct..
I don’t care
As long as I get a check”
Vane = insensitivity towards another

What’s next……..
Bills, rent, groceries, and hot meals
Drug deee. . .als, and investments
Teach those who make less
Money is the higher power
Nothing more nothing less
The weak are the bleak
My family don’t know me,
My boss hates me
No one loves me… I see
life feels like Riga mortise in the 1st degree.
I haven’t advanced in the fields I seek
I lost my advance on the grounds of greed
My fiancé is infected with diseases
Here’s something defective
My life
My faith
My soul
I have fallen like DROL
From a bats asss
I’m shyt
I think I will have a nervous break down
And drown my sorrows in a nice fifth of that shyt
Lets see….. I almost forgot my Uzi and extra clips

That completes my list….
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Old 06-30-2003, 08:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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varentao takes it up the butt!
Strong and to the point (though with depth, still to the point). Highlighted by the font you used (don't know if that was intentional or not)..

...so okay, it was a bit erratic. A bit too blunt at times when i felt you could've gone in a different direction...

..but yeah, i liked it...

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Old 06-30-2003, 09:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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very strong piece, and the font went with it perfectly. Very good

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vinous takes it up the butt!
i really liked this, the kinda ugly honesty to it, i like that. the font almost gave me a headache tho. pz.
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Old 09-24-2004, 09:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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this was crazy ~had to up it.. i think was going through a thang on this one..
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Old 09-24-2004, 09:29 PM   #6 (permalink)
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nice piece, not really the style i like to read, but the way it was sorta off beat pulled it together for me. nice---
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Old 09-26-2004, 02:36 PM   #7 (permalink)
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My life
My faith
My soul"


Damn, Good shit.
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Old 09-26-2004, 02:48 PM   #8 (permalink)
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If it was in a smaller font I don't think that it would be as effective..it was real tight and I loved that it was a poem-list or what have you....nice work..
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Old 09-30-2004, 08:26 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Thanks for the read everone.. i'll check back later with you all peace...
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this was....

ummm....

different...not really my style I guess...you did your thing though...and in all honesty thats what matters not what us poets think....I like how this was str8 up sound like one of my friends having a bad day or something you know

but it was a lil dark for me

and this is why they call you twisted...lol...I dunno bout this one this kinda makes me scared to put you in the mini series but then at the same time it could be the perfect turning point in the middle of the story to bring it back....I dunno?...we'll see
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Crazy ass piece. I missed this..

Good drop..
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I feel u ~~~ f~~~o
I write diffrent when i feed off the positive...

dont get my twisted real life story mix up with a co-lab.. i mean i'll feed off the other poet working with him and making the story bright and not gory... i write happy stuff it's just not to be shared i write real life stuff when I come to the realm...it may come off twisted to some but hey... when i vent it's not always happy..... I think i would be a tone setter in the story poetry co-lab... put me in fam.... thanks for the read... peace..

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ummm....

different...not really my style I guess...you did your thing though...and in all honesty thats what matters not what us poets think....I like how this was str8 up sound like one of my friends having a bad day or something you know

but it was a lil dark for me

and this is why they call you twisted...lol...I dunno bout this one this kinda makes me scared to put you in the mini series but then at the same time it could be the perfect turning point in the middle of the story to bring it back....I dunno?...we'll see
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NICE POST 6FT BUT LET ME SAY THI RIGHT HERE

man fuck this being black is seeing whack hated by my own who'll never be elevated to the throne of president// hell many can't control their resident, gitting pop by the cops the crime won't stop stay blind to Hip Hop// gonna tie a slip knot to my own throat and hang me high like Clint Eastwood dang beast in the hood// walk on jive blocks and it's like livestock beef everywhere//
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Very different.... not used to this style from you... but mos def like....

the font was interesting as well... good drop homie
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