what I feel now

06-30-2003, 05:08 PM

words cant express the storms my mind create
I will not accept my life is my own creation so it must be faith
that I have seen what I have seen
that I can only find peace in a dream
when awake I feel a rage not known to me
when awake I wanna cry but my pride stops me
not a tear shall be shed not for this life I lead
not a tear shall be shed not by me nor my family
I wish I could let the demons in me heart rest
everyone tells me from emotions love is the best
but it escapes me everytime
so I accept the fact that love wont be mine
as I spiral down a line of hopelessnes
i reach out but all I get is lonelyness

Mind~$oul · 06-30-2003, 09:17 PM

very emotional piece. It was short but you made ya point and you came honest. Never seen you around in the realm, hope to see more....

one luv

vinous · 06-30-2003, 09:49 PM

as I spiral down a line of hopelessnes
^^
i liked the imagery i got from that one line, very emotional piece.

06-30-2003, 05:08 PM	#1 (permalink)
Urizen Guest Posts: n/a	what I feel now words cant express the storms my mind create I will not accept my life is my own creation so it must be faith that I have seen what I have seen that I can only find peace in a dream when awake I feel a rage not known to me when awake I wanna cry but my pride stops me not a tear shall be shed not for this life I lead not a tear shall be shed not by me nor my family I wish I could let the demons in me heart rest everyone tells me from emotions love is the best but it escapes me everytime so I accept the fact that love wont be mine as I spiral down a line of hopelessnes i reach out but all I get is lonelyness

06-30-2003, 09:17 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	very emotional piece. It was short but you made ya point and you came honest. Never seen you around in the realm, hope to see more.... one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

06-30-2003, 09:49 PM	#3 (permalink)
vinous Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: in a house Posts: 368	as I spiral down a line of hopelessnes ^^ i liked the imagery i got from that one line, very emotional piece. __________________ just take this longing from my tongue all the lonely things these hands have done

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