Diary of a Mad Man

Swiss Miss · 06-25-2003, 01:39 PM

Imagine seeing things you shouldn't normally see.
Imagine emotions choking you to where you cannot breathe.
Remember that movie,
"I See Dead People"?
Well, as odd as it seems,
Maybe my life is the sequel.
Some think it's funny, but not me.
No one likes rubbing their eyes in disbelief.
I can do without that kind of suprise;
I loathe seeing illogical beings before my eyes.
I couldn't possibly ask anyone to understand.
Picture this,
Instead of floating on water,
I am sinking on land.

Lauren

misspimp · 06-25-2003, 01:53 PM

damn...that was tight shit...i like the last two lines the best...and i can believe that u see dead people-lol-even tho its not funny
keep it up
mad love

Swiss Miss · 06-25-2003, 04:32 PM

Hey, You guys seem like you would know how to record in audo format. I'm new at all this but I'd like to see what I can do with it. If you can help me holla back...didn't wanna waste a new thread so I did it in reply form

AOL IM=UTwannaB23

Lauren

Mind~$oul · 06-25-2003, 05:00 PM

pretty nice piece, nice concept and all. Wish it could have been a lil longer though...Keep them coming

one luv

MisterEThoughts · 06-25-2003, 05:11 PM

very nice loved it from the begi

Swiss Miss · 06-25-2003, 10:23 PM

Thanks

D.B. · 06-26-2003, 12:47 AM

Imagine seeing things you shouldn't normally see.
Imagine emotions choking you to where you cannot breathe.

^fav. lines...was feelin' dat most deaf...keep it up

06-26-2003, 01:33 AM

..Yes...I liked it. type of poem i enjoy reading

lpoet · 06-26-2003, 09:44 AM

nice lil piece u got here.....wasnt feeling the i see dead people line.....but overall a nice piece...

keep it up

6ftground · 06-26-2003, 11:51 PM

I like this piece it was on point.
I lke the end it had a nice twist.
Keep writting...... Peace

Quote:

Originally Posted by Swiss Miss

Imagine seeing things you shouldn't normally see.
Imagine emotions choking you to where you cannot breathe.
Remember that movie,
"I See Dead People"?
Well, as odd as it seems,
Maybe my life is the sequel.
Some think it's funny, but not me.
No one likes rubbing their eyes in disbelief.
I can do without that kind of suprise;
I loathe seeing illogical beings before my eyes.
I couldn't possibly ask anyone to understand.
Picture this,
Instead of floating on water,
I am sinking on land.

Lauren

Swiss Miss · 06-27-2003, 02:33 AM

Thanks 4 showin me some love. Well, I'm bout to check out and reply to some more posts holla @ ya girl

06-25-2003, 01:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
Swiss Miss Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Western NC Posts: 135	Diary of a Mad Man Imagine seeing things you shouldn't normally see. Imagine emotions choking you to where you cannot breathe. Remember that movie, "I See Dead People"? Well, as odd as it seems, Maybe my life is the sequel. Some think it's funny, but not me. No one likes rubbing their eyes in disbelief. I can do without that kind of suprise; I loathe seeing illogical beings before my eyes. I couldn't possibly ask anyone to understand. Picture this, Instead of floating on water, I am sinking on land. Lauren

06-25-2003, 01:53 PM	#2 (permalink)
misspimp a.k.a KATURAH Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Virginia Is For Lovers Posts: 1,308	damn...that was tight shit...i like the last two lines the best...and i can believe that u see dead people-lol-even tho its not funny keep it up mad love __________________ MAD LOVE "Never to suffer would never to have been blessed" ~THE LATE GREAT ~ ~EDGAR ALLEN POE ~

06-25-2003, 05:00 PM	#4 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	pretty nice piece, nice concept and all. Wish it could have been a lil longer though...Keep them coming one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

06-25-2003, 05:11 PM	#5 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	very nice loved it from the begi __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-26-2003, 12:47 AM	#7 (permalink)
D.B. Death Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: NJ Posts: 153	Imagine seeing things you shouldn't normally see. Imagine emotions choking you to where you cannot breathe. ^fav. lines...was feelin' dat most deaf...keep it up __________________ D eathblow

06-25-2003, 04:32 PM	#3 (permalink)
Swiss Miss Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Western NC Posts: 135	Hey, You guys seem like you would know how to record in audo format. I'm new at all this but I'd like to see what I can do with it. If you can help me holla back...didn't wanna waste a new thread so I did it in reply form AOL IM=UTwannaB23 Lauren

06-25-2003, 10:23 PM	#6 (permalink)
Swiss Miss Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Western NC Posts: 135	Thanks

06-26-2003, 01:33 AM	#8 (permalink)
FukkedUPKidR Guest Posts: n/a	..Yes...I liked it. type of poem i enjoy reading

06-26-2003, 09:44 AM	#9 (permalink)
lpoet POET Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 12,672	nice lil piece u got here.....wasnt feeling the i see dead people line.....but overall a nice piece... keep it up __________________ "SHE CAME BACK TO ME AND I PRAY SHE STAYS" --lpoet

06-27-2003, 02:33 AM	#11 (permalink)
Swiss Miss Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Western NC Posts: 135	Thanks 4 showin me some love. Well, I'm bout to check out and reply to some more posts holla @ ya girl

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