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Old 06-25-2003, 01:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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True lies…
Defines…
My inner mystery…
True values…
Allows you…
To never get to me…
Past History…
Reminds me of deep misery…
When he sent to me…
A worker from his camp…
Out to destroy and kill…
What he had worked so hard to build…
Out to rid of…
A soft dove…
Woven in his happiness…
Woven in his love…
But the principles instilled…
Proved to be filled…
Inside this great creature…
Although he tried to reach her…
He tried to break down…
What was so neatly…
Crafted with care…
He tried to take away…
But I was never scared…
He attempted to demolish…
All that stood there…
And I fought…fought hard…
Because he couldn’t remain here…
And so dear to me…
Was the worker he sent…
So near to me…
That under the workers pressure I bent…
I struggled to free myself…
From the fate he strived to bring…
I struggled to free myself…
From the pain he once laid…
And I stayed…
Because…so far he had me trapped…
And I couldn’t unwrap…
The words…the times…the memories…
The lies…
I couldn’t unshackle the joy…
He once chained to my heart…
And I couldn’t release him…
Although he was tearing me apart…
I couldn’t let go…
Because I allowed my emotions…
To linger on…
I couldn’t let go…
Because without his worker…
I felt I couldn’t be strong…
I couldn’t let go…
Because he wanted me eliminated…
He wanted to see me fail…
He wanted to crucify…
And hang me on a cross with nails…
And I could tell…that I was falling…
I had fallen…and couldn’t get up…
But I knew before long…
I would only self destruct…
And it was tough…
Tryna fight…against all odds…
But Him and his workers could not…
Destroy my mind, body or spirit…
Because of the love of God…
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Old 06-25-2003, 01:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Dang girl all I can say is wow...Nice post
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Old 06-25-2003, 04:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanx so much for da love....uppin^^^
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Old 06-25-2003, 05:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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beautiful sweetheart def nice keep working u getting good very niceee
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Old 06-25-2003, 05:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanx for the love sweetie

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Old 06-26-2003, 09:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
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this shit was ill.....like your how u put this joint together....lovin this one....keep it up...i'm lookin out for ya
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Old 06-26-2003, 02:35 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 06-26-2003, 05:51 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Yeah...I hope you stay around for a while...I'm really digging your style. Only a few people I tell that to in the Realm. This is the second joint I read from you, and I'm impressed.
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Old 06-26-2003, 06:38 PM   #9 (permalink)
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very very very tight piece.....nicely crafted piece of literature.....keep doing what you do
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Old 06-26-2003, 07:09 PM   #10 (permalink)
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that was a knockout, i like your style. keep sendin em, peace

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Old 06-26-2003, 08:36 PM   #11 (permalink)
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It's an endless battle. I was feelin this. I just wonder what inspired you to write this. Certain things can trigger things like this. I was thinking maybe the movie. anyway...nice drop here. Keep the ink flowin...

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Old 06-26-2003, 09:32 PM   #12 (permalink)
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nice drop there pimpen well done i love the flow love the story love the style keep it up Missy.
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Old 06-26-2003, 09:58 PM   #13 (permalink)
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this was well written...i've always found poems with shorter lines, easier to read..they keep my attention, keep me interested..when the line is over, i just need to see what follows it, ya know?

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Reminds me of deep misery…

^liked those lines...nice piece..keep it up ma
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Old 06-26-2003, 11:58 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Thanx so much for the love everybody....

& to wicked5744...a relationship inspired this...kinda hard to explain...but more of my poems will give u a better idea...

thanx for the love again

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Old 06-28-2003, 01:38 AM   #17 (permalink)
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lol-thanx again girl...u know u my nig

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