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Old 06-25-2003, 11:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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midnight shadows
Midnight shadows saving light
bury me asleep tonight
and dont forget the mistakes
that brought us all here today

Beauty bones fleash are one
gold can't stay love is none
I write to you so you'll believe
God wont let us stay this way

I'll never understand how you work
this pain and sadness lurks and lurks
gone tomorrow but to come again
wiser stronger than yesterday


We'll sink together...
in this cold iced sea
drown away
just you and me
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Old 06-25-2003, 12:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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wow, this is really good, the last 4 lines finish it off so well, the eimagery and the styleof verses is depressingly optimistic
"Beauty bones fleash are one
gold can't stay love is none
I write to you so you'll believe
God wont let us stay this way"

i like that part too
keep writin!!
 
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Old 06-25-2003, 01:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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This was very nice....my favorite pat is the third stanza....keep it up

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Old 06-25-2003, 02:10 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Swiss Miss takes it up the butt!
"This was very nice....my favorite pat is the third stanza....keep it up"

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Old 06-26-2003, 01:00 AM   #5 (permalink)
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D.B. takes it up the butt!
We'll sink together...
in this cold iced sea
drown away
just you and me

^fav. part...don't know y just stuck out fa me..stay up
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Old 06-26-2003, 01:33 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!Mind~$oul will do you doggie style!
Nicely written, didnt really have a favorite part that stood out to me. But keep writing i enjoyed...

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a dark piece to me....but it was good stuff , keep writing
 
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Old 06-26-2003, 09:41 AM   #8 (permalink)
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lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!lpoet will do you doggie style!
this was cool...like where u took me....as fukkedupkidr said a dark piece...but nothing wrong with that...i likes...keep it up
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