Self Destruction

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Old 06-25-2003, 03:32 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Self Destruction

society lies to me/and tries to silent me/with bribaries/just adding to the rivaly/so i react violently/sayin life aint hard but i got the scars to prove/what you do aint nothin compared to what i go thru/on a daily basis/in so many places grows so many faces/so how are we still racist/dyin under covers/cuz ²²²²²z aint wearin rubbers/thugs murdered over colors/yall some dumb muthafuckaz/bout time yall see/its all about m-o-b/know it sounds kinda funny when its commin from me/mentallity the same/stained from the pain/know i'll die before my time but with hopes to change the game/trying to maintain/in the flames/awaiting the rain/remain with nothing to lose and the world to gain/high speed, purple weed, clips, and shells/know you can see that we're on a trip to hell/but oh well/we all born to fail/pushin us into religion/so i'll never give in/cuz my vissions/are filled with su••••ion/people hear but dont listen/not to mention pay attention what you hear aint always real/ya mouth can get you killed/but still/do what you will/it takes skill/to stop this erruption/we causin self-destruction/

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--Instead of construction/we causing corruption/when hate consumes love yo' its called self-destruction/though times in life are hard/we're rewarded with scars/to prove to non-believers that we've made it this far----Instead of construction/we causing corruption/when hate consumes love yo' its called self-destruction--


we leavin the youth with no where to go/loosing the truth left with no way to grow/no one to show them the roads/instead of guessin/ask a question/learn ya lesson/alleviate the stressin/live that thug life/but understand the reason why/you cant cry if u dont try/so until the day we all die/you have to ride for your beliefs/the only way we'll be released/is if we become the streets/never retreat/and dont accept defeat/till mission is complete/going against the grain dont be a sheep/strong survive not the weak/chase your dreams but dont stay asleep/never bite your tongue be first to speak/out against the wrong/1 million strong/through the struggles and troubles you gotta carry on/1 life aint very long/do what you can while you last/its gon' go by fast/5:11 remember that it aint all about cash/its a thin line between genious and crazy/and to all the lil babies/say kaleal raised me/with one foot on each side/keep that head held high/dont let em kill your pride/sit back and stay cool while the rest collide/write out instructions/to function/save the world from self destruction/

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--Instead of construction/we causing corruption/when hate consumes love yo' its called self-destruction/though times in life are hard/we're rewarded with scars/to prove to non-believers that we've made it this far----Instead of construction/we causing corruption/when hate consumes love yo' its called self-destruction--


15:1 7 years supposed to clear our crimes/disappear on time/legendary rhymes/left to blow their minds/read between the lines/when in search for signs/that even the mentally blind/cant find/wooden caskets/tin cans filled with ashes/life flashes/before you eyes/when you can vissualize/your own demise/you realize/its hard to stay alive/trying ya best not to reach the sky/k-i-l-l-u-m-i-n-a-t-i/born to fly/taken down by genocide/but still we rise/once the full plan is revealed/my shields/keep me concealed/till my scars have healed/to remove all the evidence/all previous knowledge is irrelevant/cuz when i leave the stage/media will think i'm in the grave/damn i got em played/self made is how i stay/and my time away/will paint perfect pictures/coming back no need for riches/fuck all yall bitches/knew ²²²²²z was after me/told ya you'd never capture me/puffin on a blunt laughin happily/slowin down livin half the speed/while yall runnin frantically/long range causin casualties/self inflicted tragedy/dont mean 2 make yall mad at me/but its time to push the button/yall cant stop this mutha fuckin self-destruction/


hook:

--Instead of construction/we causing corruption/when hate consumes love yo' its called self-destruction/though times in life are hard/we're rewarded with scars/to prove to non-believers that we've made it this far----Instead of construction/we causing corruption/when hate consumes love yo' its called self-destruction--
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Old 06-25-2003, 03:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I was really feelin the message you portrayed in this piece, I liked the1st verse the best. By the way, I'm new to the forum...my name is Lauren..Nice work
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Old 06-25-2003, 03:50 AM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks lauren....glad you felt it. the whole piece started shiftin but thats exactly what was coming to mind and i had to put this up without any changes.

by the way when i say MOB it mean Mind Over Body. cats thinkin im tryin to be the next PAC. I looked up to the man but yo im my own man. Anyhow...i'll keep my eyes open for anything u write.

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Old 06-25-2003, 05:17 PM   #4 (permalink)
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damn kid this was very nice drop loved everythig about it i dunno if there are anything i would want u to change it's all niceee
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i loved this shit...by far my fav read this morning..flow was great.....not a thing lackin from it to me.....loved the first couple lines the most...drew me in with them...upin this one for u.......

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